Re: [All] edits, please review

Hi Felix,

Got your message, and here is some rework of the Disambiguation section. 
I hope that I kept your spirit... ;-)

Cheers -- Jörg

On Nov 13, 2012 at 16:07 (CET), Felix Sasaki wrote:
> Thanks, Dave, for bringing these up (again). Look all good, I'll try to
> implement these on the plane. Still I hope that we will get feedback
> from others too, esp. about Disambiguation - here I made most of changes.
>
> - Felix
>
> 2012/11/13 Dave Lewis <dave.lewis@cs.tcd.ie <mailto:dave.lewis@cs.tcd.ie>>
>
>     Felix,
>
>     haven't caught up with these latest changes, but some comments on
>     some of the older ones - but ignore them if they are not helpful.
>
>     - 1.5 out of scope
>     Yves, Arle and others may have a clearer view on this, but rather
>     than just referring to 'Localization parameters' or 'localization
>     properties', it would be clearer to refer to 'localization _project_
>     parameters' or 'localization _project_ properties.
>
>     - 1.6 important design principles
>     [minor point] you state "needed for the internationalization and
>     localization of XML schemas and documents and HTML5 documents", but
>     though schema play a role in the process, we don't literally deal
>     with localization of schema (apart from treating an xsd doc as any
>     other xml doc). so i suggest dropping the inclusion of schema in
>     this sentence.
>
>     [minor wording suggestion] - change; "For ITS markup that appears in
>     an XML instance, which XML nodes the ITS-related information
>     pertains to must be clearly defined."
>     to "For ITS markup that appears in an XML instance, *the XML nodes
>     to which the ITS-related information pertains must be clearly defined.*"
>
>     [minor improvement suggestion] under ease of integration, where you
>     discuss fitting into the W3C architecture you could add
>     "e.g. use of[XPath 1.0]
>     <http://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.html#xpath>for
>     the selection mechanism *and use of IRI's as references to relevant
>     external resources*"
>
>     5.5 Precedence between selections
>
>     for the note about precedence, should this also refer to override of
>     global information by local information and of local information by
>     local information in a more immediate ancestor? current it just
>     mentions 'rule elements'
>
>     1.1.1 Relationship to ITS1.0
>
>     [really minor - to improve clarity] We have the bullet: "Where ITS
>     1.0 data categories are implemented in XML, the implementation must
>     be conformant with the ITS 1.0 approach to XML to claim conformance
>     to ITS 2.0."
>
>     Though this is factually true, since we now include all the details
>     from ITS1.0 in ITS2.0 its perhaps redundant here as a statement
>     about conformance. It might then avoid people mistakenly seeking the
>     ITS1.0 test suite to claim ITS2.0 conformance.
>
>     cheers,
>     Dave
>
>
>
>
>
>     On 12/11/2012 23:12, Felix Sasaki wrote:
>>     Hi all,
>>
>>     I did a lot of edits, see
>>
>>     http://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.html#changelog-since-20121023
>>
>>     change 6-12.
>>
>>     Tadej, can you esp. review the global rules change? See change 10
>>     and 11.
>>
>>     For all, then you write comments, please use mails with the action
>>     item numbers mentioned in the change log.
>>
>>     Thanks,
>>
>>     Felix
>>
>>     --
>>     Felix Sasaki
>>     DFKI / W3C Fellow
>>
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>
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>
> --
> Felix Sasaki
> DFKI / W3C Fellow
>

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