CVS WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv32743

Modified Files:
	its20.odd 
Log Message:
some very minor formatting and language changes in response to Action-378

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd	2013/03/28 10:27:02	1.353
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd	2013/03/28 10:36:26	1.354
@@ -5317,7 +5317,7 @@
               <list>
                 <item>A new version of a tool returns information on an issue that has not been
                   previously checked and that is not yet classified.</item>
-                <item>A text is defective in ways to defy categorization, such as the appearance of
+                <item>A text is defective in ways that defy categorization, such as the appearance of
                   nonsense garbled text of unknown origin (e.g., a translation shows an
                   unintelligible result and/or appears unrelated to the source material).</item>
               </list>
@@ -5328,7 +5328,7 @@
                   where the issues from the other tool are not classified (for example, a
                   localization quality assurance tool interfaces with a third-party grammar
                   checker).</item>
-                <item>A tool's issues are not yet assigned to values, and, until an updated
+                <item>A tool’s issues are not yet assigned to values, and, until an updated
                   assignment is made, they may be listed as <code>uncategorized</code>. In this case
                   it is recommended that issues be assigned to appropriate values as soon as
                   possible since <code>uncategorized</code> does not foster interoperability.</item>

Received on Thursday, 28 March 2013 10:36:27 UTC