Re: For consideration: edit upon review of section 4 Duties

Thanks Laura - done.

Ben
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From: Perdue, Laura <Laura.Perdue@fmr.com>
Sent: Friday, May 21, 2021 2:05 AM
To: Mark Bird <mark.bird@databp.com>; public-md-odrl-profile@w3.org <public-md-odrl-profile@w3.org>
Subject: For consideration: edit upon review of section 4 Duties


Below for consideration: one small edit for 4 - Duties.   Will send remaining assigned section in another email.



Duty Functions

Duty functions specify the role a Party<https://www.w3.org/TR/odrl-vocab/#term-Party> plays in fulfilling a Duty. There are two: the subject who must exercise the duty's action and the object who recieves the effect of the action [adjust spelling to receives]



Thank you,

Laura





From: Mark Bird <mark.bird@databp.com>
Sent: Wednesday, May 5, 2021 12:13 PM
To: public-md-odrl-profile@w3.org
Subject: Request for ODRL Specification Reviewers



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Hi everyone,



I hope you’re week has been pleasant and productive. On last week’s ODRL community group call we talked about reviewing the Market Data Profile for ODRL<https://w3c.github.io/market-data-odrl-profile/md-odrl-profile.html> document that is close to being finalized. I’d like to ask for at least two people to sign up to review one of three sections of the document. Of course the more the merrier!



The three sections are:



  *   Parties and Constraints on Parties

     *   2.1 Supply Chain Metamodel – Parties<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Parties&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547042171%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=gd1jZ%2F3kXxNHShpqA2IMzhZ9oZBJzgUNUHjYZTCWVJ0%3D&reserved=0>
     *   2.4 Supply Chain Metamodel - Entities<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Entities&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547052136%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=DI9BQ9GyQLzhH7Uf71pr3BybeNZMyZowEIRFGGbzTlM%3D&reserved=0>
     *   5.3 Constraints on Rules<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23ConstraintsOnRules&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547052136%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=aRZiv8GBqTQVP5EO14%2BevJez6NdF4PjRFgLnlYLPpuc%3D&reserved=0>



  *   Resources and Constraints on Resources

     *   2.2 Supply Chain Metamodel - Resources<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Resources&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547062087%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=lPGXOtRTWdFvgCLJ%2Fuu7coxXxzFzJAXthBdzzRZ%2Fxu4%3D&reserved=0>
     *   5.1 Constraints on Resources<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23ConstraintsOnResources&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547062087%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=x47Gm2EVmexfbR92nDZ1wqlZJ6uCrdDMitL5u1vR2Dc%3D&reserved=0>



  *   Activities and Actions and their Constraints

     *   2.3 Supply Chain Metamodel - Activities<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Activities&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547072047%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=3%2B8JcWLNqFri7Ed2iYWJkhPJ4etRaYeynDbtYYs3Yuc%3D&reserved=0>
     *   3 Permissions<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Permissions&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547072047%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=a06P34i0xM0LHKmnnoDTYlg0OVmpjWWXkI8d%2F8do38o%3D&reserved=0>
     *   4 Duties<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c..github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Duties&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547081997%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=%2F1WOne9qVsVZR1uIB5twkyk7UYYG%2BJv9%2FqMtbMljR6k%3D&reserved=0>
     *   5.4 Constraints on Actions<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23ConstraintsOnActions&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547081997%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=6ZaH1UgJ%2FlGuTKQU%2B4DXSLBrs3VvCsBJcljBgfmYk6o%3D&reserved=0>



This review task will be relatively light. The goal isn’t to identify anything missing or wrong in the specification, but just to highlight areas that might be unclear. You’ll be looking for things like definitions that can be clarified or examples that can be tightened up. Taking a stab at updating the text would be great, but even simply calling out spots that need attention will be helpful.



You can email your notes to the group, and we can spend time going over them on next week’s call.



If you’d like to sign up for one of the three sections above please let me know on this thread, thanks!



Best,
Mark





Mark Bird | DataBP

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