TF Description Options

Dear Maturity Model TF:

Below a snipet from conversations about the formal description of our
work. I believe it's time for the TF to voice an opinion.

David, Can we address these options on today's telecon?

Thanks!
Janina

Tamsin Ewing writes:
Hi Janina
 ...
Back to the original:

The Maturity Model (MM) Task Force provides an Accessibility Maturity
Model (AMM) to guide organizations in developing the capability to buy,
build, or use accessible internal and external digital assets, products
and services, and to track changes and trends in providing these
products and services over time.

Can we remove either 'assets' (my preference) or 'products and services'
(less nebulous)?

If not, for consistency, I would want to include all these nouns in the last
clause:

The Maturity Model (MM) Task Force provides an Accessibility Maturity Model
(AMM) to guide organizations in developing the capability to buy, build, or
use accessible internal and external digital assets, products and services,
and to track changes and trends in providing these assets, products and
services over time.

Which would you prefer?

Received on Wednesday, 26 February 2025 13:44:18 UTC