- From: Steve Speicher <sspeiche@gmail.com>
- Date: Tue, 16 Jul 2013 07:31:15 -0400
- To: Ted Thibodeau Jr <tthibodeau@openlinksw.com>
- Cc: "public-ldp-wg@w3.org Working Group" <public-ldp-wg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAOUJ7JqxRkpHPqPAwn-=-GcVcBGpTwNzDdpDfHTLTqeMAwpENQ@mail.gmail.com>
On Mon, Jul 15, 2013 at 5:45 PM, Ted Thibodeau Jr <tthibodeau@openlinksw.com > wrote: > All -- > > Hi Ted, thanks for the review. > Regarding "4.9.2 HTTP GET" > at > <https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp.html#http-post-1> > > Correction, the link should be: < https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp.html#ldpr-PagingGET> > Following comments use the renumbering which came after > today's call... > > a. In 4.9.2.1 and 4.9.2.2, "section 4.8" should change to > "section 4.9". I'm not seeing this problem. Perhaps you had an early or cached copy. Do you still see these problems? > > b. subsections 4.9.2.5 through 4.9.2.7 should be nested one > deeper -- i.e., renumbered to 4.9.2.4.1 through 4.9.2.4.3 > > Likewise, I'm not seeing these. > c. I think excerpting the relevant triples from the complete > example in 4.9, under each sub-section, will help *greatly* > in comprehension and correct adoption. Also, if we're going > to mandate an "rdf:type" predicate, then any examples should > display that -- not the sugared "a" predicate. > > d. The mix of MUST and SHOULD definitely feels off in these > three subsections, which I think is due to their ordering, > not to any of these MUST/SHOULD being incorrect. I suggest > the following substitution for the current 4.9.2.5 through > 4.9.2.7 -- > > ====== > 4.9.2.4.1 The page resource representation MUST have one triple > with the subject of the page, predicate of ldp:nextPage > and object being the URL for the subsequent page. > > <http://example.org/customer-relations?firstPage> > ldp:nextPage <http://example.org/customer-relations?p=2> > . > > 4.9.2.4.2 The last page resource representation MUST have one > triple with the subject of the last page, predicate > of ldp:nextPage and object being rdf:nil. > > <http://example.org/customer-relations?p=2> > ldp:nextPage rdf:nil > . > > 4.9.2.4.3 Given the presence of the ldp:nextPage triples > described above, an LDP client could infer that > each page containing such *is* in fact an ldp:Page, > but this does not guarantee the URI of the resource > which description is being paged over. Therefore, > to lower the burden on LDP clients and increase data > fidelity, the page resource representation SHOULD > include two additional triples: one to indicate its > type, whose subject is the URL of the page, whose > predicate is rdf:type and object is ldp:Page; and > one to indicate the LDPR which description is being > paged, whose subject is the URL of the page, predicate > is ldp:pageOf, and object is the URL of the LDPR. > > <http://example.org/customer-relations?firstPage> > rdf:type ldp:Page > ; ldp:pageOf <http://example.org/customer-relations> > . > > ====== > These all seem reasonable to me. - Steve Speicher > > > Regards, > > Ted > > > -- > A: Yes. http://www.guckes.net/faq/attribution.html > | Q: Are you sure? > | | A: Because it reverses the logical flow of conversation. > | | | Q: Why is top posting frowned upon? > > Ted Thibodeau, Jr. // voice +1-781-273-0900 x32 > Senior Support & Evangelism // mailto:tthibodeau@openlinksw.com > // http://twitter.com/TallTed > OpenLink Software, Inc. // http://www.openlinksw.com/ > 10 Burlington Mall Road, Suite 265, Burlington MA 01803 > Weblog -- http://www.openlinksw.com/blogs/ > LinkedIn -- http://www.linkedin.com/company/openlink-software/ > Twitter -- http://twitter.com/OpenLink > Google+ -- http://plus.google.com/100570109519069333827/ > Facebook -- http://www.facebook.com/OpenLinkSoftware > Universal Data Access, Integration, and Management Technology Providers > > > > > > > >
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