More edits done

I made some more edits with change marks to http://www.w3.org/International/its/techniques/its-techniques.html

Some of the proposed changes are a little more substantive than just improvements to language, so please indicate whether you have any issues with the proposals.

Most important changes are in BPs 8, 9 and 14.


Yves and Jirka, mischief managed - edit token back in your court.

Cheers,
RI

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Richard Ishida
Internationalization Lead
W3C (World Wide Web Consortium)
 
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Received on Thursday, 1 November 2007 12:34:53 UTC