[XHR] i18n comment 1: Editorial needs

Comment from the i18n review of:
http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-XMLHttpRequest-20071026/

Comment 1
At http://www.w3.org/International/reviews/0711-xhr/
Editorial/substantive: E
Owner: AP

Location in reviewed document:
general

Comment: 
The introduction is rather stiffly written. Section 2 really should be divided into subsections. Among other things, it is difficult to reference parts of section 2 in its current state.

Received on Thursday, 29 November 2007 16:04:44 UTC