Re: [charmod-norm] Figure 1 needs a colour key

I take it, "table 1" has morphed in to "example 12". In that case, two comments apply. 
1) I'm at a loss to see the 3 sequences mentioned in this sentence: "Note that there are only three distinct code points sequences" (there also seems an extra 's' in "points").
2) we still have sequences breaking across lines. I keep running into people who cannot understand that they need to read successive lines as part of the same sequence.

Perhaps the same fix can address both comments: 

"Note that on each line there are only three distinct code point sequences, such as U+00C5 U+0301, U+01FA, U+0041 U+030A U+0301 on the second line."

This would also fix the extraneous "s" in "code point sequence" -- (and clarifying that a single code point is also a sequence; otherwise you'd have to write "code points or sequences."

However, when you write "code points or sequences" then you have the problem that the sequences also contain code points, so giving the example "U+00C5 U+0301, U+01FA, U+0041 U+030A U+0301" is still helpful.

Other than that, things look a lot nicer in this version.

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