Re: [alreq] Drafting “justification”

Hi
some comments

1) Justification section
- 1st §
" In a justified paragraph the width of all the lines should be the 
same as the paragraph’s measure (except, of course, the list line)."
Except also the last (or sometime the first) line

- 3rd §
"An important factor in the application of these mechanisms is they 
success"
s/they/their/

2) Alternative Shapes section
- You say "Arabic letter can come with different shapes while 
preserving its joining form"
and you give an example of shapes for final forms. This Could suggest 
that this mechanism exists only the final forms. 

- "But excessive use of alternative shapes, such as using multiple 
very wide alternatives close to each other, can create unnatural 
results." 
May be put an example of "unnatural" result. 


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