- From: Markus Lanthaler via GitHub <sysbot+gh@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 13 Mar 2018 08:16:25 +0000
- To: public-hydra-logs@w3.org
Reviewed 4 of 5 files at r1. Review status: 4 of 5 files reviewed at latest revision, all discussions resolved. --- *[drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md, line 1 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TOIWl3Y1qaNywobmq:-L7TOIWl3Y1qaNywobmr:b-mebgkj) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md#L1)):* > documentationt Typo --> documentation --- *[drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md, line 27 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TOdUC2XxJbkr-kai6:-L7TOUHpD-s8LLGDs87p:bmzf8pb) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md#L27)):* > There are situations, when i.e. Rich... should be "There are situations when, e.g., Rich..." --- *[drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md, line 33 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TOsoo-Tew7_biEHOj:-L7TOsoo-Tew7_biEHOk:b-evssbv) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md#L33)):* > could be --> is --- *[drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md, line 34 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TOuG99UG31b3lH4uu:-L7TOuG99UG31b3lH4uv:b46yxaj) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md#L34)):* > vs. --> and --- *[drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md, line 44 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TP-83BXSVMKMmo54r:-L7TP-83BXSVMKMmo54s:b-zhf62m) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md#L44)):* > api?documentation Nit: While it wouldn't matter in practice, I think people will find the query parameter confusing. I'd thus suggest to place this at `/api/documentation` --- *[drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md, line 58 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TPPiy91RhGFo6JUbh:-L7TPPiy91RhGFo6JUbi:b6d9312) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md#L58)):* > ```Markdown > { > "@context": "/api/context.jsonld", > "@id": "/api?documentation", > ``` Please type it as `hydra:ApiDocumentation` --- *[drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md, line 64 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TPUXi9P7tLTCBuxAU:-L7TPUXi9P7tLTCBuxAV:bm2d8i9) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/2.1.api-documentation-data-structures.md#L64)):* > ```Markdown > "supportedProperty": [ > { > "property": "schema:eventName", > ``` These all need to be separate objects (of type `hydra:SupportedProperty`) --- *[drafts/use-cases/2.2.api-documentation-user-document.md, line 23 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TPzMX3zglhbHuJl3g:-L7TPzMX3zglhbHuJl3h:b-wz825f) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/2.2.api-documentation-user-document.md#L23)):* > foreach (const operation of supportedProperty.supportedOperations) Did you want to add some inner statements? --- *[drafts/use-cases/3.2.pagination.md, line 35 at r1](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159#-L7TQHzC8rLcL0Y-LZWl:-L7TQHzC8rLcL0Y-LZWm:bthhxmv) ([raw file](https://github.com/hydracg/specifications/blob/9ec1f3c4b27ee71e17c55325465f43f85e77ffe3/drafts/use-cases/3.2.pagination.md#L35)):* > Cleint --> Client --- *Comments from [Reviewable](https://beta.reviewable.io/reviews/hydracg/specifications/159)* <!-- Sent from Reviewable.io --> -- GitHub Notification of comment by lanthaler Please view or discuss this issue at https://github.com/HydraCG/Specifications/pull/159#issuecomment-372581851 using your GitHub account
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