workers; hixie: Try to clarify this mess of a sentence. (whatwg r6960)

workers; hixie: Try to clarify this mess of a sentence. (whatwg r6960)

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/workers/Overview.html?r1=1.324&r2=1.325&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=6959&to=6960

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--- Overview.html 31 Jan 2012 23:36:35 -0000 1.324
+++ Overview.html 1 Feb 2012 00:52:53 -0000 1.325
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
 
    <h1>Web Workers</h1>
    
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-31-january-2012">Editor's Draft 31 January 2012</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-1-february-2012">Editor's Draft 1 February 2012</h2>
    <dl><dt>Latest Published Version:</dt>
     <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/workers/">http://www.w3.org/TR/workers/</a></dd>
     <dt>Latest Editor's Draft:</dt>
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@
   </dl><p>The W3C <a href="http://www.w3.org/2008/webapps/">Web Applications
   Working Group</a> is the W3C working group responsible for this
   specification's progress along the W3C Recommendation track.
-  This specification is the 31 January 2012 Editor's Draft.
+  This specification is the 1 February 2012 Editor's Draft.
   </p><p>This document was produced by a group operating under the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/">5
   February 2004 W3C Patent Policy</a>. W3C maintains a <a href="http://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/42538/status" rel="disclosure">public list of
   any patent disclosures</a> made in connection with the deliverables
@@ -1125,9 +1125,9 @@
   <dfn id="the-worker-s-documents">the worker's <code>Document</code>s</dfn>. Initially this list
   is empty; it is populated when the worker is created.<p>Whenever a <code>Document</code> <var title="">d</var> is <dfn id="add-a-document-to-the-worker-s-documents" title="add a document to the worker's documents">added to the
   worker's <code>Document</code>s</dfn>, the user agent must, for each
-  worker in the list of <a href="#the-worker-s-workers">the worker's workers</a> whose list
-  of <a href="#the-worker-s-documents">the worker's <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain
-  <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker-s-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
+  worker <var title="">q</var> in the list of <a href="#the-worker-s-workers">the worker's
+  workers</a> whose list of <a href="#the-worker-s-documents">the worker's
+  <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker-s-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
   documents">add <var title="">d</var> to <var title="">q</var>'s
   <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> owner's list of <span>the worker's
   <code>Document</code>s</span></a>.</p><p>Whenever a <code>Document</code> object is <span title="discard a

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