- From: poot <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 15 Dec 2011 08:21:18 -0500
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steve: minor change to wording to correct grammar
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/alt-techniques/Overview.html?r1=1.85&r2=1.86&f=h
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<body style="display: inherit;"><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C" width="72" height="48"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">HTML5: Techniques for providing useful text alternatives</h1>
-<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-26-may-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 02 December 2011</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html-alt-techniques/">http://www.w3.org/TR/html-alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd>
+<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-26-may-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 15 December 2011</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html-alt-techniques/">http://www.w3.org/TR/html-alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd>
<dt>Developer edition:</dt>
<dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/developer.html">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/developer.html</a> </dd>
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the page being read out by a voice Web
browser.</li>
<li>They have images disabled to save on download costs.</li>
- <li> They have problems to load images or the source of image is wrong. </li>
+ <li> They have problems loading images or the source of an image is wrong. </li>
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<h3 id="good-practices">General Text Alternative Good Practices</h3>
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Index: developer.html
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<body style="display: inherit;"><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C" width="72" height="48"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">HTML5: Techniques for providing useful text alternatives</h1>
-<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-26-may-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 02 December 2011</h2><dl><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Editor:</dt><dd><span>Steve Faulkner</span>, The Paciello Group <span class="ed_mailto"><a href="mailto:sfaulkner@paciellogroup.com">sfaulkner@paciellogroup.com</a></span> </dd>
+<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-26-may-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 15 December 2011</h2><dl><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Editor:</dt><dd><span>Steve Faulkner</span>, The Paciello Group <span class="ed_mailto"><a href="mailto:sfaulkner@paciellogroup.com">sfaulkner@paciellogroup.com</a></span> </dd>
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the page being read out by a voice Web
browser.</li>
<li>They have images disabled to save on download costs.</li>
- <li> They have problems to load images or the source of image is wrong. </li>
+ <li> They have problems loading images or the source of an image is wrong. </li>
</ul>
<h3 id="good-practices">General Text Alternative Good Practices</h3>
<ul>
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