hixie: fine tune <section> and <article> descriptions some more. (whatwg r5031)

hixie: fine tune <section> and <article> descriptions some more. (whatwg
r5031)

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/spec/Overview.html?r1=1.4046&r2=1.4047&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=5030&to=5031

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--- Overview.html 13 Apr 2010 08:47:14 -0000 1.4046
+++ Overview.html 13 Apr 2010 08:50:09 -0000 1.4047
@@ -12672,8 +12672,9 @@
    <dt>DOM interface:</dt>
    <dd>Uses <code><a href="#htmlelement">HTMLElement</a></code>.</dd>
   </dl><p>The <code><a href="#the-section-element">section</a></code> element <a href="#represents">represents</a> a
-  generic document or application section. A section, in this context,
-  is a thematic grouping of content, typically with a heading.<p class="example">Examples of sections would be chapters, the
+  generic section of a document or application. A section, in this
+  context, is a thematic grouping of content, typically with a
+  heading.<p class="example">Examples of sections would be chapters, the
   various tabbed pages in a tabbed dialog box, or the numbered
   sections of a thesis. A Web site's home page could be split into
   sections for an introduction, news items, contact information.<p class="note">Authors are encouraged to use the
@@ -12898,12 +12899,12 @@
    <dt>DOM interface:</dt>
    <dd>Uses <code><a href="#htmlelement">HTMLElement</a></code>.</dd>
   </dl><p>The <code><a href="#the-article-element">article</a></code> element <a href="#represents">represents</a> a
-  component of a page that consists of a self-contained composition in
-  a document, page, application, or site and that is intended to be
-  independently distributable or reusable, e.g. in syndication. This
-  could be a forum post, a magazine or newspaper article, a blog
-  entry, a user-submitted comment, an interactive widget or gadget, or
-  any other independent item of content.<p>When <code><a href="#the-article-element">article</a></code> elements are nested, the inner
+  self-contained composition in a document, page, application, or site
+  and that is intended to be independently distributable or reusable,
+  e.g. in syndication. This could be a forum post, a magazine or
+  newspaper article, a blog entry, a user-submitted comment, an
+  interactive widget or gadget, or any other independent item of
+  content.<p>When <code><a href="#the-article-element">article</a></code> elements are nested, the inner
   <code><a href="#the-article-element">article</a></code> elements represent articles that are in
   principle related to the contents of the outer article. For
   instance, a blog entry on a site that accepts user-submitted

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