hixie: Three unrelated editorial improvements. (whatwg r4059)

hixie: Three unrelated editorial improvements. (whatwg r4059)

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/spec/Overview.html?r1=1.3220&r2=1.3221&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=4058&to=4059

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3220
retrieving revision 1.3221
diff -u -d -r1.3220 -r1.3221
--- Overview.html 30 Sep 2009 07:52:30 -0000 1.3220
+++ Overview.html 30 Sep 2009 09:23:04 -0000 1.3221
@@ -44961,7 +44961,7 @@
    <li><p>The global object is the <code><a href="#window">Window</a></code> object of
    <var title="">document</var>.</li>
 
-   <li><p>The character encoding is the <a href="#document-s-character-encoding" title="document's
+   <li><p>The URL character encoding is the <a href="#document-s-character-encoding" title="document's
    character encoding">character encoding</a> of <var title="">document</var>. (<a href="#sce-not-copy">This is a
    reference, not a copy</a>.)</li>
 
@@ -47218,15 +47218,6 @@
     manifest itself, and then zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009
     CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters.</p>
 
-    <p>When the current section is the <a href="#concept-appcache-manifest-network" title="concept-appcache-manifest-network">online whitelist
-    section</a>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
-    SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, either a
-    single U+002A ASTERISK character (*) <!--
-    concept-appcache-onlinewhitelist-wildcard --> or a <a href="#valid-url">valid
-    URL</a> identifying a resource other than the manifest itself,
-    and then zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION
-    (tab) characters.</p>
-
     <p>When the current section is the <a href="#concept-appcache-manifest-fallback" title="concept-appcache-manifest-fallback">fallback
     section</a>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
     SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, a
@@ -47237,9 +47228,20 @@
     zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab)
     characters.</p>
 
+    <p>When the current section is the <a href="#concept-appcache-manifest-network" title="concept-appcache-manifest-network">online whitelist
+    section</a>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
+    SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, either a
+    single U+002A ASTERISK character (*) <!--
+    concept-appcache-onlinewhitelist-wildcard --> or a <a href="#valid-url">valid
+    URL</a> identifying a resource other than the manifest itself,
+    and then zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION
+    (tab) characters.</p>
+
+<!--
     <p class="note">The URLs in data lines can't be empty strings,
     since those would be relative URLs to the manifest itself. Such
     lines would be confused with blank or invalid lines, anyway.</p>
+-->
 
   </dl><p>Manifests may contain sections more than once. Sections may be
   empty.<p>URLs that are to be fallback pages associated with <a href="#concept-appcache-fallback-ns" title="concept-appcache-fallback-ns">fallback namespaces</a>, and
@@ -67893,11 +67895,11 @@
   its <a href="#fallback-content">fallback content</a>, the element must be ignored (it
   represents nothing).</p>
 
-  <p>Otherwise, the user agent instantiate a Java Language runtime
-  <a href="#plugin">plugin</a>, if one available. Then, the user agent should
-  pass the names and values of all the attributes on the element, and
-  <!-- then a parameter named "PARAM" whose value is null, and then
-  --> all the names and values of <a href="#concept-param-parameter" title="concept-param-parameter">parameters</a> given by
+  <p>Otherwise, the user agent should instantiate a Java Language
+  runtime <a href="#plugin">plugin</a>, if one available. Then, the user agent
+  should pass the names and values of all the attributes on the
+  element, and <!-- then a parameter named "PARAM" whose value is
+  null, and then --> all the names and values of <a href="#concept-param-parameter" title="concept-param-parameter">parameters</a> given by
   <code><a href="#the-param-element">param</a></code> elements that are children of the
   <code><a href="#the-applet-element">applet</a></code> element, in <a href="#tree-order">tree order</a>, to the
   <a href="#plugin">plugin</a> used. If the <a href="#plugin">plugin</a> supports a

Received on Wednesday, 30 September 2009 09:23:57 UTC