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mike: made minor wording and formatting changes to dl and dialog and dt and dd sections

From: poot <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 9 Sep 2009 16:52:30 +0900 (JST)
To: public-html-diffs@w3.org
Message-Id: <20090909075230.7404E2BBFF@toro.w3.mag.keio.ac.jp>
mike: made minor wording and formatting changes to dl and dialog and dt
and dd sections

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/markup/spec.html?r1=1.101&r2=1.102&f=h

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.355
retrieving revision 1.356
diff -u -d -r1.355 -r1.356
--- Overview.html	3 Sep 2009 02:39:01 -0000	1.355
+++ Overview.html	9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000	1.356
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <body>
 <div class="head">
 <h1>HTML 5: The Markup Language</h1>
-<h2>Editor&#8217;s Draft <em>3 September 2009</em>
+<h2>Editor&#8217;s Draft <em>9 September 2009</em>
 </h2>
 <dl>
 <dt>Latest Editor&#8217;s Draft:</dt>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
     
     
     <p>
-        This document is the 3 September 2009 Editor&#8217;s Draft of 
+        This document is the 9 September 2009 Editor&#8217;s Draft of 
         <cite>HTML 5: The Markup Language</cite>.
       </p>
     
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="datalist.html#datalist"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">datalist</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">predefined options for other controls</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="dd-toc">
-<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dd.html#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span></a>
+<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dd.html#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="del-toc">
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="del.html#del"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">del</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">deleted text</span></a>
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dl.html#dl"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dl</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description list</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="dt-toc">
-<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dt.html#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term or &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker</span></a>
+<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dt.html#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="em-toc">
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="em.html#em"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">em</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">emphatic stress</span></a>

Index: dd.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/dd.html,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -d -r1.16 -r1.17
--- dd.html	20 Aug 2009 09:22:37 -0000	1.16
+++ dd.html	9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000	1.17
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/strict.dtd">
 <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
 <head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii">
-<title>HTML5: dd &#8211; description or span of discourse</title>
+<title>HTML5: dd &#8211; description/value or span of discourse/quote</title>
 <link rel="stylesheet" href="style.css" type="text/css"></link>
 <link rel="stylesheet" href="W3C-ED.css" type="text/css"></link>
 </head>
@@ -12,14 +12,14 @@
 <span class="nav-next"><a href="del.html">del &#187;</a></span>
 </div>
 <div id="dd" class="section">
-      <h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span> <a class="hash" href="#dd">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#dd-toc">T</a></h2>
+      <h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span> <a class="hash" href="#dd">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#dd-toc">T</a></h2>
       <div id="dd-longdesc" class="longdesc">
     <p>The 
     <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a>
     element represents either a
-    <a href="dd.html#dd-description">description</a>
+    <a href="dd.html#dd-description">description/value</a>
     or a
-    <a href="dd.html#dd-discourse">span of discourse</a>.</p>
+    <a href="dd.html#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a>.</p>
   </div>
       <div class="no-number no-toc" id="dd-content">
         <h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#dd-content">#</a></h2>
@@ -67,16 +67,16 @@
     <p>If a <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element&#8217;s parent
     is a <a href="dl.html#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the 
     <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents
-    the
-    <dfn id="dd-description" title="dd-description">description</dfn>
-    (or value) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
+    a
+    <dfn id="dd-description" title="dd-description">description/value</dfn>
+    part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
     <a href="dl.html#description-list">description list</a>.</p>
     <p>If a <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element&#8217;s parent
     is a <a href="dialog.html#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element,
     then the <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element
     represents a
-    <dfn id="dd-discourse" title="dd-discourse">span of discourse</dfn>
-    (a quote) in a talker-discourse
+    <dfn id="dd-discourse" title="dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</dfn>
+    in a talker-discourse
     (speaker-quote) pair in a
     <a href="dialog.html#conversation">conversation</a>.</p>
   </div></div></div>

Index: dt.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/dt.html,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -d -r1.16 -r1.17
--- dt.html	20 Aug 2009 09:22:37 -0000	1.16
+++ dt.html	9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000	1.17
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/strict.dtd">
 <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
 <head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii">
-<title>HTML5: dt &#8211; term or &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker</title>
+<title>HTML5: dt &#8211; term/name or talker/speaker</title>
 <link rel="stylesheet" href="style.css" type="text/css"></link>
 <link rel="stylesheet" href="W3C-ED.css" type="text/css"></link>
 </head>
@@ -12,14 +12,14 @@
 <span class="nav-next"><a href="em.html">em &#187;</a></span>
 </div>
 <div id="dt" class="section">
-      <h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term or &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker</span> <a class="hash" href="#dt">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#dt-toc">T</a></h2>
+      <h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span> <a class="hash" href="#dt">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#dt-toc">T</a></h2>
       <div id="dt-longdesc" class="longdesc">
     <p>The 
     <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a>
     element represents either a
-    <a href="dt.html#dt-term">term</a>
+    <a href="dt.html#dt-term">term/name</a>
     or a
-    &#8220;<a href="dt.html#dt-talker">talker</a>&#8221;/speaker.</p>
+    <a href="dt.html#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a>.</p>
   </div>
       <div class="no-number no-toc" id="dt-content">
         <h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#dt-content">#</a></h2>
@@ -66,16 +66,16 @@
     <p>If a <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element&#8217;s parent
     is a <a href="dl.html#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the 
     <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element 
-    represents the
-    <dfn id="dt-term" title="dt-term">term</dfn>
-    (or name) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
+    represents a
+    <dfn id="dt-term" title="dt-term">term/name</dfn>
+    part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
     <a href="dl.html#description-list">description list</a>.</p>
     <p>If a <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element&#8217;s parent
     is a <a href="dialog.html#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element,
     then the <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element
     represents a 
-    &#8220;<dfn id="dt-talker" title="dt-talker">talker</dfn>&#8221;
-    (or speaker) part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a
+    <dfn id="dt-talker" title="dt-talker">talker/speaker</dfn>
+    part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a
     <a href="dialog.html#conversation">conversation</a>.</p>
   </div></div></div>
 <hr class="footerbreak"></hr>

Index: spec.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/spec.html,v
retrieving revision 1.101
retrieving revision 1.102
diff -u -d -r1.101 -r1.102
--- spec.html	3 Sep 2009 02:39:03 -0000	1.101
+++ spec.html	9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000	1.102
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <body>
 <div class="head">
 <h1>HTML 5: The Markup Language</h1>
-<h2>Editor&#8217;s Draft <em>3 September 2009</em>
+<h2>Editor&#8217;s Draft <em>9 September 2009</em>
 </h2>
 <dl>
 <dt>Latest Editor&#8217;s Draft:</dt>
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     
     
     <p>
-        This document is the 3 September 2009 Editor&#8217;s Draft of 
+        This document is the 9 September 2009 Editor&#8217;s Draft of 
         <cite>HTML 5: The Markup Language</cite>.
       </p>
     
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#datalist"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">datalist</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">predefined options for other controls</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="dd-toc">
-<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span></a>
+<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="del-toc">
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#del"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">del</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">deleted text</span></a>
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dl"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dl</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description list</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="dt-toc">
-<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term or &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker</span></a>
+<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="em-toc">
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#em"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">em</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">emphatic stress</span></a>
@@ -2329,7 +2329,7 @@
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#datalist"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">datalist</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">predefined options for other controls</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="dd-toc">
-<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span></a>
+<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="del-toc">
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#del"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">del</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">deleted text</span></a>
@@ -2350,7 +2350,7 @@
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dl"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dl</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description list</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="dt-toc">
-<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term or &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker</span></a>
+<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="em-toc">
 <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#em"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">em</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">emphatic stress</span></a>
@@ -4937,15 +4937,15 @@
 </div>
 <div id="dd" class="section">
       <h2 class="element-head">
-<span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span> <a class="hash" href="#dd">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#dd-toc">T</a>
+<span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span> <a class="hash" href="#dd">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#dd-toc">T</a>
 </h2>
       <div id="dd-longdesc" class="longdesc">
     <p>The 
     <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a>
     element represents either a
-    <a href="#dd-description">description</a>
+    <a href="#dd-description">description/value</a>
     or a
-    <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse</a>.</p>
+    <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a>.</p>
   </div>
       <div class="no-number no-toc" id="dd-content">
         <h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#dd-content">#</a>
@@ -5018,16 +5018,16 @@
     <p>If a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element&#8217;s parent
     is a <a href="#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the 
     <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents
-    the
-    <dfn id="dd-description" title="dd-description">description</dfn>
-    (or value) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
+    a
+    <dfn id="dd-description" title="dd-description">description/value</dfn>
+    part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
     <a href="#description-list">description list</a>.</p>
     <p>If a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element&#8217;s parent
     is a <a href="#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element,
     then the <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element
     represents a
-    <dfn id="dd-discourse" title="dd-discourse">span of discourse</dfn>
-    (a quote) in a talker-discourse
+    <dfn id="dd-discourse" title="dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</dfn>
+    in a talker-discourse
     (speaker-quote) pair in a
     <a href="#conversation">conversation</a>.</p>
   </div>
@@ -5301,9 +5301,11 @@
     represents a
     <dfn id="conversation" title="conversation">conversation</dfn>,
     which consists of zero or more talker-discourse (speaker-quote)
-    pairs; each pair associates a &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker (represented by
+    pairs; each pair associates a
+    <a href="#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a>
+    (represented by
     a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element) with a span of
-    span of discourse/quote
+    <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a>
     (represented by a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element).</p>
   </div>
 </div>
@@ -5446,25 +5448,27 @@
     a
     <dfn id="description-list" title="description-list">description list</dfn>,
     which consists of zero or more term-description (name-value)
-    groupings; each grouping associates one or more terms/names
+    groupings; each grouping associates one or more
+    <a href="#dt-term">terms/names</a>
     (the contents of <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a>
-    elements) with one or more descriptions/values (the
-    contents of <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a>
+    elements) with one or more
+    <a href="#dd-description">descriptions/values</a>
+    (the contents of <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a>
     elements).</p>
   </div>
 </div>
 </div>
 <div id="dt" class="section">
       <h2 class="element-head">
-<span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term or &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker</span> <a class="hash" href="#dt">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#dt-toc">T</a>
+<span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span> <a class="hash" href="#dt">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#dt-toc">T</a>
 </h2>
       <div id="dt-longdesc" class="longdesc">
     <p>The 
     <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a>
     element represents either a
-    <a href="#dt-term">term</a>
+    <a href="#dt-term">term/name</a>
     or a
-    &#8220;<a href="#dt-talker">talker</a>&#8221;/speaker.</p>
+    <a href="#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a>.</p>
   </div>
       <div class="no-number no-toc" id="dt-content">
         <h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#dt-content">#</a>
@@ -5532,16 +5536,16 @@
     <p>If a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element&#8217;s parent
     is a <a href="#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the 
     <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element 
-    represents the
-    <dfn id="dt-term" title="dt-term">term</dfn>
-    (or name) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
+    represents a
+    <dfn id="dt-term" title="dt-term">term/name</dfn>
+    part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
     <a href="#description-list">description list</a>.</p>
     <p>If a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element&#8217;s parent
     is a <a href="#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element,
     then the <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element
     represents a 
-    &#8220;<dfn id="dt-talker" title="dt-talker">talker</dfn>&#8221;
-    (or speaker) part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a
+    <dfn id="dt-talker" title="dt-talker">talker/speaker</dfn>
+    part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a
     <a href="#conversation">conversation</a>.</p>
   </div>
 </div>

Index: dialog.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/dialog.html,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -d -r1.11 -r1.12
--- dialog.html	20 Aug 2009 09:22:37 -0000	1.11
+++ dialog.html	9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000	1.12
@@ -53,9 +53,11 @@
     represents a
     <dfn id="conversation" title="conversation">conversation</dfn>,
     which consists of zero or more talker-discourse (speaker-quote)
-    pairs; each pair associates a &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker (represented by
+    pairs; each pair associates a
+    <a href="dt.html#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a>
+    (represented by
     a <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element) with a span of
-    span of discourse/quote
+    <a href="dd.html#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a>
     (represented by a <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element).</p>
   </div></div></div>
 <hr class="footerbreak"></hr>

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements.html,v
retrieving revision 1.21
retrieving revision 1.22
diff -u -d -r1.21 -r1.22
--- elements.html	3 Sep 2009 02:39:03 -0000	1.21
+++ elements.html	9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000	1.22
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
 </li>
 <li id="datalist-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="datalist.html#datalist"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">datalist</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">predefined options for other controls</span></a>
 </li>
-<li id="dd-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dd.html#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span></a>
+<li id="dd-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dd.html#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="del-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="del.html#del"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">del</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">deleted text</span></a>
 </li>
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 </li>
 <li id="dl-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dl.html#dl"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dl</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">description list</span></a>
 </li>
-<li id="dt-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dt.html#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term or &#8220;talker&#8221;/speaker</span></a>
+<li id="dt-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dt.html#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span></a>
 </li>
 <li id="em-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="em.html#em"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">em</span> &#8211; <span class="shortdesc">emphatic stress</span></a>
 </li>

Index: dl.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/dl.html,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- dl.html	20 Aug 2009 09:22:37 -0000	1.12
+++ dl.html	9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000	1.13
@@ -57,10 +57,12 @@
     a
     <dfn id="description-list" title="description-list">description list</dfn>,
     which consists of zero or more term-description (name-value)
-    groupings; each grouping associates one or more terms/names
+    groupings; each grouping associates one or more
+    <a href="dt.html#dt-term">terms/names</a>
     (the contents of <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a>
-    elements) with one or more descriptions/values (the
-    contents of <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a>
+    elements) with one or more
+    <a href="dd.html#dd-description">descriptions/values</a>
+    (the contents of <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a>
     elements).</p>
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