- From: poot <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 9 Sep 2009 16:52:30 +0900 (JST)
- To: public-html-diffs@w3.org
mike: made minor wording and formatting changes to dl and dialog and dt and dd sections http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/markup/spec.html?r1=1.101&r2=1.102&f=h =================================================================== RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/Overview.html,v retrieving revision 1.355 retrieving revision 1.356 diff -u -d -r1.355 -r1.356 --- Overview.html 3 Sep 2009 02:39:01 -0000 1.355 +++ Overview.html 9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000 1.356 @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ <body> <div class="head"> <h1>HTML 5: The Markup Language</h1> -<h2>Editor’s Draft <em>3 September 2009</em> +<h2>Editor’s Draft <em>9 September 2009</em> </h2> <dl> <dt>Latest Editor’s Draft:</dt> @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ <p> - This document is the 3 September 2009 Editor’s Draft of + This document is the 9 September 2009 Editor’s Draft of <cite>HTML 5: The Markup Language</cite>. </p> @@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="datalist.html#datalist"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">datalist</span> – <span class="shortdesc">predefined options for other controls</span></a> </li> <li id="dd-toc"> -<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dd.html#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span></a> +<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dd.html#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span></a> </li> <li id="del-toc"> <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="del.html#del"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">del</span> – <span class="shortdesc">deleted text</span></a> @@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dl.html#dl"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dl</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description list</span></a> </li> <li id="dt-toc"> -<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dt.html#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term or “talker”/speaker</span></a> +<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dt.html#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span></a> </li> <li id="em-toc"> <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="em.html#em"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">em</span> – <span class="shortdesc">emphatic stress</span></a> Index: dd.html =================================================================== RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/dd.html,v retrieving revision 1.16 retrieving revision 1.17 diff -u -d -r1.16 -r1.17 --- dd.html 20 Aug 2009 09:22:37 -0000 1.16 +++ dd.html 9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000 1.17 @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/strict.dtd"> <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"> <head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"> -<title>HTML5: dd – description or span of discourse</title> +<title>HTML5: dd – description/value or span of discourse/quote</title> <link rel="stylesheet" href="style.css" type="text/css"></link> <link rel="stylesheet" href="W3C-ED.css" type="text/css"></link> </head> @@ -12,14 +12,14 @@ <span class="nav-next"><a href="del.html">del »</a></span> </div> <div id="dd" class="section"> - <h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span> <a class="hash" href="#dd">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#dd-toc">T</a></h2> + <h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span> <a class="hash" href="#dd">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#dd-toc">T</a></h2> <div id="dd-longdesc" class="longdesc"> <p>The <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents either a - <a href="dd.html#dd-description">description</a> + <a href="dd.html#dd-description">description/value</a> or a - <a href="dd.html#dd-discourse">span of discourse</a>.</p> + <a href="dd.html#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a>.</p> </div> <div class="no-number no-toc" id="dd-content"> <h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#dd-content">#</a></h2> @@ -67,16 +67,16 @@ <p>If a <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element’s parent is a <a href="dl.html#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents - the - <dfn id="dd-description" title="dd-description">description</dfn> - (or value) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a + a + <dfn id="dd-description" title="dd-description">description/value</dfn> + part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a <a href="dl.html#description-list">description list</a>.</p> <p>If a <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element’s parent is a <a href="dialog.html#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element, then the <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents a - <dfn id="dd-discourse" title="dd-discourse">span of discourse</dfn> - (a quote) in a talker-discourse + <dfn id="dd-discourse" title="dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</dfn> + in a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a <a href="dialog.html#conversation">conversation</a>.</p> </div></div></div> Index: dt.html =================================================================== RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/dt.html,v retrieving revision 1.16 retrieving revision 1.17 diff -u -d -r1.16 -r1.17 --- dt.html 20 Aug 2009 09:22:37 -0000 1.16 +++ dt.html 9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000 1.17 @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/strict.dtd"> <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"> <head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"> -<title>HTML5: dt – term or “talker”/speaker</title> +<title>HTML5: dt – term/name or talker/speaker</title> <link rel="stylesheet" href="style.css" type="text/css"></link> <link rel="stylesheet" href="W3C-ED.css" type="text/css"></link> </head> @@ -12,14 +12,14 @@ <span class="nav-next"><a href="em.html">em »</a></span> </div> <div id="dt" class="section"> - <h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term or “talker”/speaker</span> <a class="hash" href="#dt">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#dt-toc">T</a></h2> + <h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span> <a class="hash" href="#dt">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#dt-toc">T</a></h2> <div id="dt-longdesc" class="longdesc"> <p>The <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element represents either a - <a href="dt.html#dt-term">term</a> + <a href="dt.html#dt-term">term/name</a> or a - “<a href="dt.html#dt-talker">talker</a>”/speaker.</p> + <a href="dt.html#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a>.</p> </div> <div class="no-number no-toc" id="dt-content"> <h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#dt-content">#</a></h2> @@ -66,16 +66,16 @@ <p>If a <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element’s parent is a <a href="dl.html#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element - represents the - <dfn id="dt-term" title="dt-term">term</dfn> - (or name) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a + represents a + <dfn id="dt-term" title="dt-term">term/name</dfn> + part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a <a href="dl.html#description-list">description list</a>.</p> <p>If a <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element’s parent is a <a href="dialog.html#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element, then the <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element represents a - “<dfn id="dt-talker" title="dt-talker">talker</dfn>” - (or speaker) part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a + <dfn id="dt-talker" title="dt-talker">talker/speaker</dfn> + part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a <a href="dialog.html#conversation">conversation</a>.</p> </div></div></div> <hr class="footerbreak"></hr> Index: spec.html =================================================================== RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/spec.html,v retrieving revision 1.101 retrieving revision 1.102 diff -u -d -r1.101 -r1.102 --- spec.html 3 Sep 2009 02:39:03 -0000 1.101 +++ spec.html 9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000 1.102 @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ <body> <div class="head"> <h1>HTML 5: The Markup Language</h1> -<h2>Editor’s Draft <em>3 September 2009</em> +<h2>Editor’s Draft <em>9 September 2009</em> </h2> <dl> <dt>Latest Editor’s Draft:</dt> @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ <p> - This document is the 3 September 2009 Editor’s Draft of + This document is the 9 September 2009 Editor’s Draft of <cite>HTML 5: The Markup Language</cite>. </p> @@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#datalist"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">datalist</span> – <span class="shortdesc">predefined options for other controls</span></a> </li> <li id="dd-toc"> -<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span></a> +<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span></a> </li> <li id="del-toc"> <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#del"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">del</span> – <span class="shortdesc">deleted text</span></a> @@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dl"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dl</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description list</span></a> </li> <li id="dt-toc"> -<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term or “talker”/speaker</span></a> +<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span></a> </li> <li id="em-toc"> <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#em"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">em</span> – <span class="shortdesc">emphatic stress</span></a> @@ -2329,7 +2329,7 @@ <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#datalist"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">datalist</span> – <span class="shortdesc">predefined options for other controls</span></a> </li> <li id="dd-toc"> -<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span></a> +<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span></a> </li> <li id="del-toc"> <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#del"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">del</span> – <span class="shortdesc">deleted text</span></a> @@ -2350,7 +2350,7 @@ <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dl"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dl</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description list</span></a> </li> <li id="dt-toc"> -<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term or “talker”/speaker</span></a> +<span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span></a> </li> <li id="em-toc"> <span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="#em"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">em</span> – <span class="shortdesc">emphatic stress</span></a> @@ -4937,15 +4937,15 @@ </div> <div id="dd" class="section"> <h2 class="element-head"> -<span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span> <a class="hash" href="#dd">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#dd-toc">T</a> +<span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span> <a class="hash" href="#dd">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#dd-toc">T</a> </h2> <div id="dd-longdesc" class="longdesc"> <p>The <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents either a - <a href="#dd-description">description</a> + <a href="#dd-description">description/value</a> or a - <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse</a>.</p> + <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a>.</p> </div> <div class="no-number no-toc" id="dd-content"> <h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#dd-content">#</a> @@ -5018,16 +5018,16 @@ <p>If a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element’s parent is a <a href="#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents - the - <dfn id="dd-description" title="dd-description">description</dfn> - (or value) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a + a + <dfn id="dd-description" title="dd-description">description/value</dfn> + part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a <a href="#description-list">description list</a>.</p> <p>If a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element’s parent is a <a href="#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element, then the <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents a - <dfn id="dd-discourse" title="dd-discourse">span of discourse</dfn> - (a quote) in a talker-discourse + <dfn id="dd-discourse" title="dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</dfn> + in a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a <a href="#conversation">conversation</a>.</p> </div> @@ -5301,9 +5301,11 @@ represents a <dfn id="conversation" title="conversation">conversation</dfn>, which consists of zero or more talker-discourse (speaker-quote) - pairs; each pair associates a “talker”/speaker (represented by + pairs; each pair associates a + <a href="#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a> + (represented by a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element) with a span of - span of discourse/quote + <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a> (represented by a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element).</p> </div> </div> @@ -5446,25 +5448,27 @@ a <dfn id="description-list" title="description-list">description list</dfn>, which consists of zero or more term-description (name-value) - groupings; each grouping associates one or more terms/names + groupings; each grouping associates one or more + <a href="#dt-term">terms/names</a> (the contents of <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> - elements) with one or more descriptions/values (the - contents of <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> + elements) with one or more + <a href="#dd-description">descriptions/values</a> + (the contents of <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> elements).</p> </div> </div> </div> <div id="dt" class="section"> <h2 class="element-head"> -<span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term or “talker”/speaker</span> <a class="hash" href="#dt">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#dt-toc">T</a> +<span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span> <a class="hash" href="#dt">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#dt-toc">T</a> </h2> <div id="dt-longdesc" class="longdesc"> <p>The <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element represents either a - <a href="#dt-term">term</a> + <a href="#dt-term">term/name</a> or a - “<a href="#dt-talker">talker</a>”/speaker.</p> + <a href="#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a>.</p> </div> <div class="no-number no-toc" id="dt-content"> <h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#dt-content">#</a> @@ -5532,16 +5536,16 @@ <p>If a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element’s parent is a <a href="#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element - represents the - <dfn id="dt-term" title="dt-term">term</dfn> - (or name) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a + represents a + <dfn id="dt-term" title="dt-term">term/name</dfn> + part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a <a href="#description-list">description list</a>.</p> <p>If a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element’s parent is a <a href="#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element, then the <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element represents a - “<dfn id="dt-talker" title="dt-talker">talker</dfn>” - (or speaker) part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a + <dfn id="dt-talker" title="dt-talker">talker/speaker</dfn> + part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a <a href="#conversation">conversation</a>.</p> </div> </div> Index: dialog.html =================================================================== RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/dialog.html,v retrieving revision 1.11 retrieving revision 1.12 diff -u -d -r1.11 -r1.12 --- dialog.html 20 Aug 2009 09:22:37 -0000 1.11 +++ dialog.html 9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000 1.12 @@ -53,9 +53,11 @@ represents a <dfn id="conversation" title="conversation">conversation</dfn>, which consists of zero or more talker-discourse (speaker-quote) - pairs; each pair associates a “talker”/speaker (represented by + pairs; each pair associates a + <a href="dt.html#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a> + (represented by a <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> element) with a span of - span of discourse/quote + <a href="dd.html#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a> (represented by a <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> element).</p> </div></div></div> <hr class="footerbreak"></hr> Index: elements.html =================================================================== RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements.html,v retrieving revision 1.21 retrieving revision 1.22 diff -u -d -r1.21 -r1.22 --- elements.html 3 Sep 2009 02:39:03 -0000 1.21 +++ elements.html 9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000 1.22 @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ </li> <li id="datalist-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="datalist.html#datalist"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">datalist</span> – <span class="shortdesc">predefined options for other controls</span></a> </li> -<li id="dd-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dd.html#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</span></a> +<li id="dd-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dd.html#dd"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dd</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</span></a> </li> <li id="del-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="del.html#del"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">del</span> – <span class="shortdesc">deleted text</span></a> </li> @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ </li> <li id="dl-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dl.html#dl"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dl</span> – <span class="shortdesc">description list</span></a> </li> -<li id="dt-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dt.html#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term or “talker”/speaker</span></a> +<li id="dt-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="dt.html#dt"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">dt</span> – <span class="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</span></a> </li> <li id="em-toc"><span class="toc-section-number"></span><a href="em.html#em"><span class="toc-section-number"></span> <span class="element">em</span> – <span class="shortdesc">emphatic stress</span></a> </li> Index: dl.html =================================================================== RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/dl.html,v retrieving revision 1.12 retrieving revision 1.13 diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13 --- dl.html 20 Aug 2009 09:22:37 -0000 1.12 +++ dl.html 9 Sep 2009 07:51:59 -0000 1.13 @@ -57,10 +57,12 @@ a <dfn id="description-list" title="description-list">description list</dfn>, which consists of zero or more term-description (name-value) - groupings; each grouping associates one or more terms/names + groupings; each grouping associates one or more + <a href="dt.html#dt-term">terms/names</a> (the contents of <a href="dt.html#dt" class="element">dt</a> - elements) with one or more descriptions/values (the - contents of <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> + elements) with one or more + <a href="dd.html#dd-description">descriptions/values</a> + (the contents of <a href="dd.html#dd" class="element">dd</a> elements).</p> </div></div></div> <hr class="footerbreak"></hr>
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