html-author/Overview.html 1.41 Editoral issues in DOCTYPE syntax sectio

Editoral issues in DOCTYPE syntax section

3 The HTML and XHTML Syntax
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/html-author/Overview.1.41.html#the-html-and-xhtml-syntax
3.1 Syntactic Overview
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/html-author/Overview.1.41.html#syntactic-overview
3.2.1 DOCTYPE Declaration
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/html-author/Overview.1.41.html#doctype-declaration

http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/html-author/Overview.diff.html
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/html-author/Overview.html?r1=1.40&r2=1.41&f=h

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--- Overview.html 5 Mar 2009 16:52:13 -0000 1.40
+++ Overview.html 5 Mar 2009 16:58:50 -0000 1.41
@@ -579,6 +579,7 @@
       The following are all valid alternatives in the HTML syntax:</p>
 
    <div class="html example">
+    <p>HTML Example:</p>
     <pre><code>&lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
 
 &lt;!DOCTYPE html SYSTEM "about:legacy-compat"&gt;
@@ -596,6 +597,7 @@
       versions of the <code>DOCTYPE</code>s given above may be used.</p>
 
    <div class="xhtml example">
+    <p>XHTML Example:</p>
     <pre><code>&lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
 
 &lt;!DOCTYPE html SYSTEM "about:legacy-compat"&gt;</code></pre>
@@ -603,9 +605,9 @@
 
    <p>However, there are no restrictions placed on the use of alternative
       DOCTYPEs in XHTML. You may, if you wish, use a custom <code>DOCTYPE</code>
-      referring to a custom DTD, if you wish to use them for validation purposes.
+      referring to a custom DTD, typically for validation purposes.
       Although, be advised that DTDs have a number of limitations compared
-      with other alternative schemas.</p>
+      with other alternative schema languages.</p>
 
   </section>
 

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@@ -425,6 +425,7 @@
       The following are all valid alternatives in the HTML syntax:</p>
 
    <div class="html example">
+    <p>HTML Example:</p>
     <pre><code>&lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
 
 &lt;!DOCTYPE html SYSTEM "about:legacy-compat"&gt;
@@ -442,6 +443,7 @@
       versions of the <code>DOCTYPE</code>s given above may be used.</p>
 
    <div class="xhtml example">
+    <p>XHTML Example:</p>
     <pre><code>&lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
 
 &lt;!DOCTYPE html SYSTEM "about:legacy-compat"&gt;</code></pre>
@@ -449,9 +451,9 @@
 
    <p>However, there are no restrictions placed on the use of alternative
       DOCTYPEs in XHTML. You may, if you wish, use a custom <code>DOCTYPE</code>
-      referring to a custom DTD, if you wish to use them for validation purposes.
+      referring to a custom DTD, typically for validation purposes.
       Although, be advised that DTDs have a number of limitations compared
-      with other alternative schemas.</p>
+      with other alternative schema languages.</p>
 
   </section>

Received on Sunday, 8 March 2009 13:35:39 UTC