more editorial cleanup (abnf, clean up some notes about IE, remove redundant note) (whatwg r3266)

more editorial cleanup (abnf, clean up some notes about IE, remove
redundant note) (whatwg r3266)

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/eventsource/Overview.html?r1=1.32&r2=1.33&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=3265&to=3266

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/eventsource/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.32
retrieving revision 1.33
diff -u -d -r1.32 -r1.33
--- Overview.html 11 Jun 2009 19:13:45 -0000 1.32
+++ Overview.html 16 Jun 2009 00:17:22 -0000 1.33
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@
    <h1>Server-Sent Events</h1>
    <!--ZZZ:-->
    <!--<h2 class="no-num no-toc">W3C Working Draft 23 April 2009</h2>-->
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-date-1-january-1970">Editor's Draft 11 June 2009</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-date-1-january-1970">Editor's Draft 16 June 2009</h2>
    <!--:ZZZ-->
    <dl><!-- ZZZ: update the month/day (twice), (un)comment out
     <dt>This Version:</dt>
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@
   specification's progress along the W3C Recommendation track.
   <!--ZZZ:-->
   <!-- This specification is the 23 April 2009 Working Draft. -->
-  This specification is the 11 June 2009 Editor's Draft.
+  This specification is the 16 June 2009 Editor's Draft.
   <!--:ZZZ-->
   </p><!-- required patent boilerplate --><p>This document was produced by a group operating under the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/">5
   February 2004 W3C Patent Policy</a>. W3C maintains a <a href="http://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/42538/status" rel="disclosure">public list of
@@ -450,8 +450,7 @@
   task">queued</span> by <code><a href="#eventsource">EventSource</a></code> objects is the
   <dfn id="remote-event-task-source">remote event task source</dfn>.<h2 id="parsing-an-event-stream"><span class="secno">6 </span>Parsing an event stream</h2><p>This event stream format's MIME type is
   <code>text/event-stream</code>.<p>The event stream format is as described by the <code title="">stream</code> production of the following ABNF, the
-  character set for which is Unicode. <a href="#references">[ABNF]</a></p><!-- XXX
-  ftp://ftp.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/std/std68.txt --><pre>stream        = [ bom ] *event
+  character set for which is Unicode. <a href="#references">[ABNF]</a><pre>stream        = [ bom ] *event
 event         = *( comment / field ) end-of-line
 comment       = colon *any-char end-of-line
 field         = 1*name-char [ colon [ space ] *any-char ] end-of-line

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