- From: poot <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 17 Aug 2009 00:46:55 +0900 (JST)
- To: public-html-diffs@w3.org
mike: various wording changes
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/markup/Overview.html?r1=1.349&r2=1.350&f=h
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+++ Overview.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:27 -0000 1.350
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
<body>
<div class="head">
<h1>HTML 5: The Markup Language</h1>
-<h2>Editor’s Draft <em>16 August 2009</em>
+<h2>Editor’s Draft <em>17 August 2009</em>
</h2>
<dl>
<dt>Latest Editor’s Draft:</dt>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
<p>
- This document is the 16 August 2009 Editor’s Draft of
+ This document is the 17 August 2009 Editor’s Draft of
<cite>HTML 5: The Markup Language</cite>.
</p>
<p>
Index: meta.name.html
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--- meta.name.html 16 Aug 2009 10:53:43 -0000 1.12
+++ meta.name.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.13
@@ -63,9 +63,7 @@
<dd>When the <a href="meta.name.html#meta.name.attrs.name">name</a>
attribute is set to "<code>description</code>",
the value of the <a href="meta.name.html#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
- must be a string that describes the page. The value
- must be appropriate for use in, for example, a
- search-results page from a search engine.</dd>
+ must be a string that describes the page.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt>generator</dt>
@@ -74,9 +72,7 @@
the value of the <a href="meta.name.html#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
must be a string
that identifies the software used to generate the
- document. If the page is hand-authored, the
- "<code>generator</code>" metadata name must not be
- used.</dd>
+ document.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt>application-name</dt>
@@ -84,10 +80,7 @@
attribute is set to "<code>application-name</code>",
the value of the <a href="meta.name.html#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
must be a string representing the name of the Web
- application that the page represents. If the page is
- not a Web application, the
- "<code>application-name</code>" metadata name must not be
- used.</dd>
+ application that the page represents.</dd>
</dl>
<p>A <dfn id="registered-metadata-name">registered metadata
name</dfn> is any metadata name registered in the central <a href="http://wiki.whatwg.org/wiki/MetaExtensions">MetaExtensions registration page</a>.</p>
Index: script.html
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--- script.html 16 Aug 2009 10:53:44 -0000 1.17
+++ script.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.18
@@ -15,8 +15,7 @@
<h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">script</span> – <span class="shortdesc">embedded script</span> <a class="hash" href="#script">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#script-toc">T</a></h2>
<div id="script-longdesc" class="longdesc">
<p>The <a href="script.html#script" class="element">script</a> element
- allows authors to include dynamic script and data blocks in
- their documents.</p>
+ dynamic script and data blocks to be included in documents.</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="script-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#script-content">#</a></h2>
Index: audio.html
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--- audio.html 16 Aug 2009 10:53:40 -0000 1.17
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@@ -54,9 +54,8 @@
stopping.</dd>
<dt><a class="attribute-name" id="audio.attrs.autobuffer" title="audio.attrs.autobuffer" href="audio.html#audio.attrs.autobuffer">autobuffer</a> = <span class="attr-values"></span> </dt>
- <dd>Instructs the UA that the author believes that
- downloading the entire audio stream optimistically will be
- worthwhile.</dd>
+ <dd>Instructs the UA that downloading the entire audio
+ stream optimistically is considered worthwhile.</dd>
<dt><a class="attribute-name" id="audio.attrs.controls" title="audio.attrs.controls" href="audio.html#audio.attrs.controls">controls</a> = <span class="attr-values"></span> </dt>
<dd>Instructs the UA to expose a user interface for
Index: bdo.html
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--- bdo.html 16 Aug 2009 10:53:40 -0000 1.13
+++ bdo.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.14
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@
<div id="bdo" class="section">
<h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">bdo</span> – <span class="shortdesc">BiDi override</span> <a class="hash" href="#bdo">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#bdo-toc">T</a></h2>
<div id="bdo-longdesc" class="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="bdo.html#bdo" class="element">bdo</a> element allows
- authors to override the Unicode BiDi algorithm by explicitly
- specifying a direction override.</p>
+ <p>The <a href="bdo.html#bdo" class="element">bdo</a> element provides
+ a means to specify a direction override of the Unicode BiDi
+ algorithm.</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="bdo-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#bdo-content">#</a></h2>
Index: style.html
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--- style.html 16 Aug 2009 10:53:44 -0000 1.16
+++ style.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.17
@@ -14,9 +14,10 @@
<div id="style" class="section">
<h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">style</span> – <span class="shortdesc">style (presentation) information</span> <a class="hash" href="#style">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#style-toc">T</a></h2>
<div id="style-longdesc" class="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="style.html#style" class="element">style</a> element
- allows authors to embed style information in their
- documents.</p>
+ <p>The
+ <a href="style.html#style" class="element">style</a>
+ element
+ allows style information to be embedded in documents.</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="style-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#style-content">#</a></h2>
@@ -59,10 +60,11 @@
"scoped"
<a href="terminology.html#choice" title="EITHER/OR CHOICE" class="rnc-symbol">|</a> ""
</span> </dt>
- <dd>Instructs the UA to
- apply the specified style information only to the <a href="style.html#style" class="element">style</a> element’s parent
- element, and that element’s child nodes. Otherwise, the
- specified styles must, if applied, be applied to the
+ <dd>Indicates that the specified style information is meant
+ to apply only to the
+ <a href="style.html#style" class="element">style</a>
+ element’s parent element, and that element’s child nodes.
+ Otherwise, the specified styles are meant to apply to the
entire document.</dd>
</dl></div>
Index: base.html
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--- base.html 16 Aug 2009 10:53:40 -0000 1.13
+++ base.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.14
@@ -14,10 +14,11 @@
<div id="base" class="section">
<h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">base</span> – <span class="shortdesc">base URL</span> <a class="hash" href="#base">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#base-toc">T</a></h2>
<div id="base-longdesc" class="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="base.html#base" class="element">base</a> element allows
- authors to specify a document’s base URL for the purposes of
- resolving relative URLs, and the name of the default browsing
- context for the purposes of following hyperlinks.</p>
+ <p>The <a href="base.html#base" class="element">base</a> element
+ specifies a document-wide base URL for the purposes of
+ resolving relative URLs, and document-wide default
+ <a href="terminology.html#context">browsing context</a> name
+ for the purposes of following hyperlinks.</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="base-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#base-content">#</a></h2>
@@ -45,8 +46,7 @@
<a class="ref" href="datatypes.html#common.data.browsing-context-name-or-keyword" title="common.data.browsing-context-name-or-keyword">browsing-context-name-or-keyword</a>
</span> </dt>
<dd>A <a href="terminology.html#context">browsing context</a> name or
- keyword. UAs use this value when following
- hyperlinks.</dd>
+ keyword for use in following hyperlinks.</dd>
</dl></div>
Index: spec.html
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--- spec.html 16 Aug 2009 10:57:36 -0000 1.95
+++ spec.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.96
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
<body>
<div class="head">
<h1>HTML 5: The Markup Language</h1>
-<h2>Editor’s Draft <em>16 August 2009</em>
+<h2>Editor’s Draft <em>17 August 2009</em>
</h2>
<dl>
<dt>Latest Editor’s Draft:</dt>
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
<p>
- This document is the 16 August 2009 Editor’s Draft of
+ This document is the 17 August 2009 Editor’s Draft of
<cite>HTML 5: The Markup Language</cite>.
</p>
<p>
@@ -3384,9 +3384,8 @@
<dt>
<a class="attribute-name" id="audio.attrs.autobuffer" title="audio.attrs.autobuffer" href="#audio.attrs.autobuffer">autobuffer</a> = <span class="attr-values"></span> </dt>
- <dd>Instructs the UA that the author believes that
- downloading the entire audio stream optimistically will be
- worthwhile.</dd>
+ <dd>Instructs the UA that downloading the entire audio
+ stream optimistically is considered worthwhile.</dd>
<dt>
<a class="attribute-name" id="audio.attrs.controls" title="audio.attrs.controls" href="#audio.attrs.controls">controls</a> = <span class="attr-values"></span> </dt>
@@ -3511,10 +3510,11 @@
<span class="element">base</span> – <span class="shortdesc">base URL</span> <a class="hash" href="#base">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#base-toc">T</a>
</h2>
<div id="base-longdesc" class="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="#base" class="element">base</a> element allows
- authors to specify a document’s base URL for the purposes of
- resolving relative URLs, and the name of the default browsing
- context for the purposes of following hyperlinks.</p>
+ <p>The <a href="#base" class="element">base</a> element
+ specifies a document-wide base URL for the purposes of
+ resolving relative URLs, and document-wide default
+ <a href="#context">browsing context</a> name
+ for the purposes of following hyperlinks.</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="base-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#base-content">#</a>
@@ -3550,8 +3550,7 @@
<a class="ref" href="#common.data.browsing-context-name-or-keyword" title="common.data.browsing-context-name-or-keyword">browsing-context-name-or-keyword</a>
</span> </dt>
<dd>A <a href="#context">browsing context</a> name or
- keyword. UAs use this value when following
- hyperlinks.</dd>
+ keyword for use in following hyperlinks.</dd>
</dl>
</div>
@@ -3669,9 +3668,9 @@
<span class="element">bdo</span> – <span class="shortdesc">BiDi override</span> <a class="hash" href="#bdo">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#bdo-toc">T</a>
</h2>
<div id="bdo-longdesc" class="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="#bdo" class="element">bdo</a> element allows
- authors to override the Unicode BiDi algorithm by explicitly
- specifying a direction override.</p>
+ <p>The <a href="#bdo" class="element">bdo</a> element provides
+ a means to specify a direction override of the Unicode BiDi
+ algorithm.</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="bdo-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#bdo-content">#</a>
@@ -10965,9 +10964,7 @@
<dd>When the <a href="#meta.name.attrs.name">name</a>
attribute is set to "<code>description</code>",
the value of the <a href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
- must be a string that describes the page. The value
- must be appropriate for use in, for example, a
- search-results page from a search engine.</dd>
+ must be a string that describes the page.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt>generator</dt>
@@ -10976,9 +10973,7 @@
the value of the <a href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
must be a string
that identifies the software used to generate the
- document. If the page is hand-authored, the
- "<code>generator</code>" metadata name must not be
- used.</dd>
+ document.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt>application-name</dt>
@@ -10986,10 +10981,7 @@
attribute is set to "<code>application-name</code>",
the value of the <a href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
must be a string representing the name of the Web
- application that the page represents. If the page is
- not a Web application, the
- "<code>application-name</code>" metadata name must not be
- used.</dd>
+ application that the page represents.</dd>
</dl>
<p>A <dfn id="registered-metadata-name">registered metadata
name</dfn> is any metadata name registered in the central <a href="http://wiki.whatwg.org/wiki/MetaExtensions">MetaExtensions registration page</a>.</p>
@@ -12845,8 +12837,7 @@
</h2>
<div id="script-longdesc" class="longdesc">
<p>The <a href="#script" class="element">script</a> element
- allows authors to include dynamic script and data blocks in
- their documents.</p>
+ dynamic script and data blocks to be included in documents.</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="script-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#script-content">#</a>
@@ -13225,10 +13216,14 @@
<span class="element">source</span> – <span class="shortdesc">media source</span> <a class="hash" href="#source">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#source-toc">T</a>
</h2>
<div id="source-longdesc" class="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="#source" class="element">source</a> element
- allows authors to specify multiple
- <a href="#media-source">media sources</a>
- for media elements.</p>
+ <p>The
+ <a href="#source" class="element">source</a>
+ element
+ enables multiple <a href="#media-source">media sources</a> to
+ be specified for
+ <a href="#audio" class="element">audio</a>
+ <a href="#video" class="element">video</a>
+ .</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="source-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#source-content">#</a>
@@ -13451,9 +13446,10 @@
<span class="element">style</span> – <span class="shortdesc">style (presentation) information</span> <a class="hash" href="#style">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="#style-toc">T</a>
</h2>
<div id="style-longdesc" class="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="#style" class="element">style</a> element
- allows authors to embed style information in their
- documents.</p>
+ <p>The
+ <a href="#style" class="element">style</a>
+ element
+ allows style information to be embedded in documents.</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="style-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#style-content">#</a>
@@ -13505,10 +13501,11 @@
"scoped"
<a href="#choice" title="EITHER/OR CHOICE" class="rnc-symbol">|</a> ""
</span> </dt>
- <dd>Instructs the UA to
- apply the specified style information only to the <a href="#style" class="element">style</a> element’s parent
- element, and that element’s child nodes. Otherwise, the
- specified styles must, if applied, be applied to the
+ <dd>Indicates that the specified style information is meant
+ to apply only to the
+ <a href="#style" class="element">style</a>
+ element’s parent element, and that element’s child nodes.
+ Otherwise, the specified styles are meant to apply to the
entire document.</dd>
</dl>
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@@ -14,10 +14,14 @@
<div id="source" class="section">
<h2 class="element-head"><span class="element">source</span> – <span class="shortdesc">media source</span> <a class="hash" href="#source">#</a> <a class="toc-bak" href="Overview.html#source-toc">T</a></h2>
<div id="source-longdesc" class="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="source.html#source" class="element">source</a> element
- allows authors to specify multiple
- <a href="source.html#media-source">media sources</a>
- for media elements.</p>
+ <p>The
+ <a href="source.html#source" class="element">source</a>
+ element
+ enables multiple <a href="source.html#media-source">media sources</a> to
+ be specified for
+ <a href="audio.html#audio" class="element">audio</a>
+ <a href="video.html#video" class="element">video</a>
+ .</p>
</div>
<div class="no-number no-toc" id="source-content">
<h2 class="element-subhead">Content model <a class="hash" href="#source-content">#</a></h2>
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