CVS html5/html-polyglot

Update of /sources/public/html5/html-polyglot
In directory roscoe:/tmp/cvs-serv13913

Modified Files:
	html-polyglot.html 
Log Message:
Edits as detailed in bug 24451, comment 4

--- /sources/public/html5/html-polyglot/html-polyglot.html	2014/02/03 22:35:57	1.28
+++ /sources/public/html5/html-polyglot/html-polyglot.html	2014/02/06 00:37:13	1.29
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
         var respecConfig = {
             specStatus:   "ED",
             shortName:    "html-polyglot",
-            publishDate:  "2014-02-03",
+            publishDate:  "2014-02-05",
             previousPublishDate:  "2010-10-19",
             // previousDiffURI:  "http://htmlwg.org/heartbeat/WD-html-polyglot-20131008/",
 previousMaturity:  "WD",
@@ -369,11 +369,11 @@
         <h4>A minimal HTML document</h4>
         <p>
             Every <a>polyglot markup</a> document therefore contains an <code>html</code>, <code>head</code>, <code>title</code>,
-            and <code>body</code> element, represented in the code with their tags.
+            and <code>body</code> element.
             The <code>html</code> element is the root element.
             The <code>head</code> and <code>body</code> elements are children of the <code>html</code> element.
             The <code>title</code> element is a child of the <code>head</code> element.
-            Therefore, the following source code would be the most basic <a>polyglot markup</a> document.
+            Therefore, the following is the most basic <a>polyglot markup</a> document.
         </p>
 		<pre class="example highlight">&lt;!DOCTYPE html>
 &lt;html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" lang="" xml:lang="">
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@
 		</pre>
     </section>
     <section id="required-tags-exampls">
-        <h4>Required tags examples</h4>
+        <h4>Required element examples</h4>
         <p>
             Whenever it uses a <code>tr</code> element, <a>polyglot markup</a> always wraps the <code>tr</code> element inside a
             <code>tbody</code>, <code>thead</code>, or <code>tfoot</code> element.
@@ -422,14 +422,14 @@
 
 </section>
 <section id="excluded-elements" class="section">
-    <h3>Excluded elements and tags</h3>
+    <h3>Excluded elements</h3>
 
     <p>
         The <code>noscript</code> element is non-conforming in XHTML, and therefore also in <a>polyglot markup</a>,
         due to the fact that XML has no mechanism by which to produce the effect it has in HTML.[[!HTML5]]
     </p>
     <p class="note">
-        Elements with features designed for HTML alone, are non-polyglot from the outset. Currently, all such
+        Elements with features designed for HTML alone are non-polyglot from the outset. Currently, all such
         elements are legacy elements, and all but <code>noscript</code>, which HTML5 forbids in XHTML alone, are
         also obsoleted by the HTML specification for both HTML and XHTML.
     </p>

Received on Thursday, 6 February 2014 00:37:15 UTC