html5/html4-differences Overview.src.html,1.104,1.105 Overview.html,1.127,1.128

Update of /sources/public/html5/html4-differences
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	Overview.src.html Overview.html 
Log Message:
editorial editor fixes Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=12435

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/html4-differences/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.127
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diff -u -d -r1.127 -r1.128
--- Overview.html	28 Apr 2011 13:55:49 -0000	1.127
+++ Overview.html	28 Apr 2011 14:03:07 -0000	1.128
@@ -2035,7 +2035,7 @@
 
   <h2 class=no-num id=acknowledgments>Acknowledgments</h2>
 
-  <p>The editor would like to thank Ben Millard, Bruce Lawson, Cameron
+  <p>The editors would like to thank Ben Millard, Bruce Lawson, Cameron
    McCormack, Charles McCathieNevile, Dan Connolly, David
    H&aring;s&auml;ther, Dennis German, Frank Ellermann, Frank Palinkas,
    Futomi Hatano<!-- 羽田野太巳 -->, Gordon P. Hemsley, Henri Sivonen,
@@ -2043,10 +2043,10 @@
    Leif Halvard Silli, Maciej Stachowiak, Marcos Caceres, Mark Pilgrim,
    Martijn Wargers, Martyn Haigh, Masataka Yakura, Michael Smith,
    <i>Ms2ger</i>, Olivier Gendrin, &Oslash;istein E. Andersen, Philip
-   J&auml;genstedt, Philip Taylor, Randy Peterman, Simon Pieters, Toby
-   Inkster, and Yngve Spjeld Landro for their contributions to this document
-   as well as to all the people who have contributed to HTML5 over the years
-   for improving the Web!
+   J&auml;genstedt, Philip Taylor, Randy Peterman, Toby Inkster, and Yngve
+   Spjeld Landro for their contributions to this document as well as to all
+   the people who have contributed to HTML5 over the years for improving the
+   Web!
 
   <h2 class=no-num id=references>References</h2>
 
@@ -2083,7 +2083,7 @@
     (editor's draft), I. Hickson. WHATWG.
 
    <dd><cite><a href="http://www.w3.org/html/wg/html5/">HTML5</a></cite>
-    (editors' draft), I. Hickson. W3C.
+    (editor's draft), I. Hickson. W3C.
 
    <dt>[<dfn id=ref-psl>PSL</dfn>]
 

Index: Overview.src.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/html4-differences/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.104
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diff -u -d -r1.104 -r1.105
--- Overview.src.html	28 Apr 2011 13:55:49 -0000	1.104
+++ Overview.src.html	28 Apr 2011 14:03:07 -0000	1.105
@@ -1642,7 +1642,7 @@
 
     <h2 class="no-num" id="acknowledgments">Acknowledgments</h2>
 
-    <p>The editor would like to thank
+    <p>The editors would like to thank
 
     Ben Millard,
     Bruce Lawson,
@@ -1675,7 +1675,6 @@
     Philip J&auml;genstedt,
     Philip Taylor,
     Randy Peterman,
-    Simon Pieters,
     Toby Inkster, and
     Yngve Spjeld Landro
 
@@ -1718,7 +1717,7 @@
       (editor's draft), I. Hickson. WHATWG.</dd>
 
       <dd><cite><a href="http://www.w3.org/html/wg/html5/">HTML5</a></cite>
-      (editors' draft), I. Hickson. W3C.</dd>
+      (editor's draft), I. Hickson. W3C.</dd>
 
       <dt>[<dfn id="ref-psl">PSL</dfn>]</dt>

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