- From: Michael Smith via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2010 08:58:42 +0000
- To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Update of /sources/public/html5/markup/elements
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv31795/elements
Modified Files:
s.html video.html
Log Message:
various editorial tweaks
Index: video.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/video.html,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -d -r1.15 -r1.16
--- video.html 13 Dec 2010 08:06:43 -0000 1.15
+++ video.html 13 Dec 2010 08:58:40 -0000 1.16
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
</dl>
<dl>
<dt id="video.attrs.audio">audio</dt>
- <dd>Represents the default state of audio channel of the video,
+ <dd>Represents default states of the audio channel of the video,
potentially overriding user preferences.</dd>
<dd>If any
values are given in the
@@ -83,8 +83,8 @@
they instruct the UA to set default audio states, as follows:
<ul>
<li><code>muted</code>: instructs the UA to override the
- user’s preferences, if any, and always default the video
- to muted</li>
+ user’s preferences, if any, and always default the initial audio
+ mutedness state to muted</li>
</ul>
</dd>
</dl>
Index: s.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/s.html,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -d -r1.6 -r1.7
--- s.html 30 Nov 2010 06:55:53 -0000 1.6
+++ s.html 13 Dec 2010 08:58:40 -0000 1.7
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
<div id="longdesc">
<p>The
<span class="element">s</span>
- element represents a span of struck text.</p>
+ element represents contents that are no longer accurate or no longer
+ relevant and that therefore has been “struck” from the document.</p>
</div>
<div id="changes">
<p>Although previous versions of HTML defined the
<span class="element">s</span>
element only in presentational terms, the element has now been given
the specific semantic purpose of representing contents that are no
- longer accurate or no longer relevant and that therefore has been
- “struck” from the document.</p>
+ longer accurate or no longer relevant.</p>
</div>
</div>
Received on Monday, 13 December 2010 08:58:44 UTC