- From: Michael Smith via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 09 Sep 2009 07:52:02 +0000
- To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Update of /sources/public/html5/markup/elements
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv6557/elements
Modified Files:
dd.html dialog.html dl.html dt.html
Log Message:
made minor wording and formatting changes to dl and dialog and dt and dd sections
Index: dd.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/dd.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- dd.html 29 Jul 2009 11:23:47 -0000 1.4
+++ dd.html 9 Sep 2009 07:52:00 -0000 1.5
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
<div xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
<h4>The dd element</h4>
- <div id="shortdesc">description or span of discourse</div>
+ <div id="shortdesc">description/value or span of discourse/quote</div>
<div id="longdesc">
<p>The
<a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a>
element represents either a
- <a href="#dd-description">description</a>
+ <a href="#dd-description">description/value</a>
or a
- <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse</a>.</p>
+ <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a>.</p>
</div>
<div id="tags">
<p>A <code><a href="#dd">dd</a></code> element must have a
@@ -23,12 +23,12 @@
<p>If a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element’s parent
is a <a href="#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the
<a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element represents
- the
+ a
<dfn
id="dd-description"
title="dd-description"
- >description</dfn>
- (or value) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
+ >description/value</dfn>
+ part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
<a href="#description-list">description list</a>.</p>
<p>If a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element’s parent
is a <a href="#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element,
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@
<dfn
id="dd-discourse"
title="dd-discourse"
- >span of discourse</dfn>
- (a quote) in a talker-discourse
+ >span of discourse/quote</dfn>
+ in a talker-discourse
(speaker-quote) pair in a
<a href="#conversation">conversation</a>.</p>
</div>
Index: dt.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/dt.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- dt.html 29 Jul 2009 11:23:47 -0000 1.4
+++ dt.html 9 Sep 2009 07:52:00 -0000 1.5
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
<div xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
<h4>The dt element</h4>
- <div id="shortdesc">term or “talker”/speaker</div>
+ <div id="shortdesc">term/name or talker/speaker</div>
<div id="longdesc">
<p>The
<a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a>
element represents either a
- <a href="#dt-term">term</a>
+ <a href="#dt-term">term/name</a>
or a
- “<a href="#dt-talker">talker</a>”/speaker.</p>
+ <a href="#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a>.</p>
</div>
<div id="tags">
<p>A <code><a href="#dt">dt</a></code> element must have a
@@ -22,22 +22,22 @@
<p>If a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element’s parent
is a <a href="#dl" class="element">dl</a> element, then the
<a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element
- represents the
+ represents a
<dfn
id="dt-term"
title="dt-term"
- >term</dfn>
- (or name) part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
+ >term/name</dfn>
+ part of a term-description (name-value) grouping in a
<a href="#description-list">description list</a>.</p>
<p>If a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element’s parent
is a <a href="#dialog" class="element">dialog</a> element,
then the <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element
represents a
- “<dfn
+ <dfn
id="dt-talker"
title="dt-talker"
- >talker</dfn>”
- (or speaker) part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a
+ >talker/speaker</dfn>
+ part of a talker-discourse (speaker-quote) pair in a
<a href="#conversation">conversation</a>.</p>
</div>
</div>
Index: dl.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/dl.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- dl.html 29 Jul 2009 11:23:47 -0000 1.4
+++ dl.html 9 Sep 2009 07:52:00 -0000 1.5
@@ -13,10 +13,12 @@
title="description-list"
>description list</dfn>,
which consists of zero or more term-description (name-value)
- groupings; each grouping associates one or more terms/names
+ groupings; each grouping associates one or more
+ <a href="#dt-term">terms/names</a>
(the contents of <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a>
- elements) with one or more descriptions/values (the
- contents of <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a>
+ elements) with one or more
+ <a href="#dd-description">descriptions/values</a>
+ (the contents of <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a>
elements).</p>
</div>
</div>
Index: dialog.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/dialog.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- dialog.html 29 Jul 2009 11:23:47 -0000 1.4
+++ dialog.html 9 Sep 2009 07:52:00 -0000 1.5
@@ -13,9 +13,11 @@
title="conversation"
>conversation</dfn>,
which consists of zero or more talker-discourse (speaker-quote)
- pairs; each pair associates a “talker”/speaker (represented by
+ pairs; each pair associates a
+ <a href="#dt-talker">talker/speaker</a>
+ (represented by
a <a href="#dt" class="element">dt</a> element) with a span of
- span of discourse/quote
+ <a href="#dd-discourse">span of discourse/quote</a>
(represented by a <a href="#dd" class="element">dd</a> element).</p>
</div>
</div>
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