html5/html-author Overview.html,1.40,1.41 Overview.src.html,1.41,1.42

Update of /sources/public/html5/html-author
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv18115

Modified Files:
	Overview.html Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
Editoral issues in DOCTYPE syntax section

Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/html-author/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.40
retrieving revision 1.41
diff -u -d -r1.40 -r1.41
--- Overview.html	5 Mar 2009 16:52:13 -0000	1.40
+++ Overview.html	5 Mar 2009 16:58:50 -0000	1.41
@@ -579,6 +579,7 @@
 			   The following are all valid alternatives in the HTML syntax:</p>
 
 			<div class="html example">
+				<p>HTML Example:</p>
 				<pre><code>&lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
 
 &lt;!DOCTYPE html SYSTEM "about:legacy-compat"&gt;
@@ -596,6 +597,7 @@
 			   versions of the <code>DOCTYPE</code>s given above may be used.</p>
 
 			<div class="xhtml example">
+				<p>XHTML Example:</p>
 				<pre><code>&lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
 
 &lt;!DOCTYPE html SYSTEM "about:legacy-compat"&gt;</code></pre>
@@ -603,9 +605,9 @@
 
 			<p>However, there are no restrictions placed on the use of alternative
 			   DOCTYPEs in XHTML. You may, if you wish, use a custom <code>DOCTYPE</code>
-			   referring to a custom DTD, if you wish to use them for validation purposes.
+			   referring to a custom DTD, typically for validation purposes.
 			   Although, be advised that DTDs have a number of limitations compared
-			   with other alternative schemas.</p>
+			   with other alternative schema languages.</p>
 
 		</section>
 

Index: Overview.src.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/html-author/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.41
retrieving revision 1.42
diff -u -d -r1.41 -r1.42
--- Overview.src.html	5 Mar 2009 16:52:13 -0000	1.41
+++ Overview.src.html	5 Mar 2009 16:58:50 -0000	1.42
@@ -425,6 +425,7 @@
 			   The following are all valid alternatives in the HTML syntax:</p>
 
 			<div class="html example">
+				<p>HTML Example:</p>
 				<pre><code>&lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
 
 &lt;!DOCTYPE html SYSTEM "about:legacy-compat"&gt;
@@ -442,6 +443,7 @@
 			   versions of the <code>DOCTYPE</code>s given above may be used.</p>
 
 			<div class="xhtml example">
+				<p>XHTML Example:</p>
 				<pre><code>&lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
 
 &lt;!DOCTYPE html SYSTEM "about:legacy-compat"&gt;</code></pre>
@@ -449,9 +451,9 @@
 
 			<p>However, there are no restrictions placed on the use of alternative
 			   DOCTYPEs in XHTML. You may, if you wish, use a custom <code>DOCTYPE</code>
-			   referring to a custom DTD, if you wish to use them for validation purposes.
+			   referring to a custom DTD, typically for validation purposes.
 			   Although, be advised that DTDs have a number of limitations compared
-			   with other alternative schemas.</p>
+			   with other alternative schema languages.</p>
 
 		</section>
 

Received on Thursday, 5 March 2009 16:59:03 UTC