- From: Michael Smith via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 07:42:44 +0000
- To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Update of /sources/public/html5/markup/elements
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv26632/elements
Modified Files:
meter.html progress.html
Log Message:
made refinements to documentation for <meter>
Index: meter.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/meter.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- meter.html 29 Jul 2009 07:19:25 -0000 1.5
+++ meter.html 29 Jul 2009 07:42:42 -0000 1.6
@@ -9,61 +9,30 @@
<div id="attributes">
<dl>
<dt id="meter.attrs.min">min</dt>
- <dd>The lower bound of the range; the <code>max</code>
- attribute specifies the upper bound. The
- <code>value</code> attribute specifies the value to have
- the gauge indicate as the “measured” value.</dd>
+ <dd>The lower bound of the range for the meter.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt id="meter.attrs.max">max</dt>
- <dd>Specifies the upper bound.</dd>
+ <dd>The upper bound of the range for the meter.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt id="meter.attrs.value">value</dt>
- <dd>Specifies the value to have the gauge indicate as the
- “measured” value.</dd>
+ <dd>The “measured” value shown by meter.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt id="meter.attrs.low">low</dt>
- <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
- "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
- is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
- that is considered to be the "low" part, and the
- <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
- range that is considered to be the "high" part. The
- <code>optimum</code> attribute
- gives the
- position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
- this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
- the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
- naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
- values are good.</dd>
+ <dd>The point that marks the upper boundary of the “low”
+ segment of the meter.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt id="meter.attrs.high">high</dt>
- <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
- "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
- is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
- that is considered to be the "low" part, and the <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
- range that is considered to be the "high" part. The <code>optimum</code> attribute gives the
- position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
- this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
- the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
- naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
- values are good.</dd>
- </dl>
+ <dd>The point that marks the lower boundary of the “high”
+ segment of the meter.</dd>
+ </dl>
<dl>
<dt id="meter.attrs.optimum">optimum</dt>
- <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
- "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
- is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
- that is considered to be the "low" part, and the <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
- range that is considered to be the "high" part. The <code>optimum</code> attribute gives the
- position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
- this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
- the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
- naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
- values are good.</dd>
+ <dd>The point that marks the “optimum” position for the
+ meter.</dd>
</dl>
</div>
<!-- examples:
@@ -71,5 +40,4 @@
fraction of a voting population to have selected a particular
candidate.
-->
- </div>
</div>
Index: progress.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/progress.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- progress.html 29 Jul 2009 07:19:25 -0000 1.5
+++ progress.html 29 Jul 2009 07:42:42 -0000 1.6
@@ -17,13 +17,4 @@
units are arbitrary and not specified.</dd>
</dl>
</div>
- <div id="details">
- <p>The progress is either indeterminate, indicating that
- progress is being made but that it is not clear how much more
- work remains to be done before the task is complete (for
- example, because the task is waiting for a remote host to
- respond), or the progress is a number in the range zero to a
- maximum, giving the fraction of work that has so far been
- completed.</p>
- </div>
</div>
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