html5/html-author Overview.html,1.9,1.10 Overview.src.html,1.9,1.10

• From: Lachlan Hunt via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
• Date: Tue, 10 Jun 2008 14:44:30 +0000
• To: public-html-commits@w3.org
• Message-Id: <E1K655K-0007VF-9v@lionel-hutz.w3.org>

Update of /sources/public/html5/html-author
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv28822

Modified Files:
	Overview.html Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
Minor revision of the glossary

Index: Overview.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/html-author/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -d -r1.9 -r1.10
--- Overview.html	10 Jun 2008 13:45:09 -0000	1.9
+++ Overview.html	10 Jun 2008 14:44:28 -0000	1.10
@@ -911,7 +911,7 @@
      <h1>Third Level Heading</h1>
    </section>
  </section>
-</body
+</body>
 </pre>
   </div>
 
@@ -920,16 +920,16 @@
   <dl>
    <dt>HTML Serialisation
 
-   <dd>An HTML serialisation is a document authored using the HTML syntax,
-    typically delivered using the <code>text/html</code> media type and is
-    expected to be parsed using an HTML parser.
+   <dd>An HTML serialisation is a document authored using the HTML syntax
+    that is expected to be parsed using an HTML parser. Such documents are
+    delivered using the <code>text/html</code> media type.
 
    <dt>XHTML Serialisation
 
-   <dd>An XHTML serialisation is an HTML document authored using XML syntax,
-    typically delivered using an XML media type such as
-    <code>application/xhtml+xml</code> or <code>application/xml</code> and is
-    expected to be parsed using an XML parser.
+   <dd>An XHTML serialisation is an HTML document authored using XML syntax
+    that is expected to be parsed using an XML parser. Such documents are
+    delivered using an XML media type such as
+    <code>application/xhtml+xml</code> or <code>application/xml</code>
 
    <dt>DOM
 

Index: Overview.src.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/html-author/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -d -r1.9 -r1.10
--- Overview.src.html	10 Jun 2008 13:45:09 -0000	1.9
+++ Overview.src.html	10 Jun 2008 14:44:28 -0000	1.10
@@ -680,7 +680,7 @@
      &lt;h1&gt;Third Level Heading&lt;/h1&gt;
    &lt;/section&gt;
  &lt;/section&gt;
-&lt;/body
+&lt;/body&gt;
 </pre>
 	</div>
 	<h2>
@@ -688,14 +688,14 @@
 	</h2>
 	<dl>
 		<dt>HTML Serialisation</dt>
-		<dd>An HTML serialisation is a document authored using the HTML syntax,
-		    typically delivered using the <code>text/html</code> media type and
-		    is expected to be parsed using an HTML parser.</dd>
+		<dd>An HTML serialisation is a document authored using the HTML syntax
+			that is expected to be parsed using an HTML parser. Such documents
+			are delivered using the <code>text/html</code> media type.</dd>
 		<dt>XHTML Serialisation</dt>
 		<dd>An XHTML serialisation is an HTML document authored using XML
-		    syntax, typically delivered using an XML media type such as
-		    <code>application/xhtml+xml</code> or <code>application/xml</code>
-		    and is expected to be parsed using an XML parser.</dd>
+		    syntax that is expected to be parsed using an XML parser. Such
+		    documents are delivered using an XML media type such as
+		    <code>application/xhtml+xml</code> or <code>application/xml</code></dd>
 		<dt>DOM</dt>
 		<dd>Document Object Model</dd>
 	</dl>

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