[Bug 25595] Better definitions needed for session, keys and license

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=25595

--- Comment #5 from David Dorwin <ddorwin@google.com> ---
There are multiple proposals, so let me make sure I understand the specific
changes.

* Key Session *
Proposed change: Replace the first sentence with the text in comment #2.

This proposal sounds fine to me.

* Key *
Proposed change: Use "Each of these keys" and add the last sentence.

The former is fine. It's unclear what the intent of the latter is. This seems a
bit redundant since these are the definitions as used in the spec text and the
definition already says "Unless otherwise stated".

(It might be a good idea to add an introductory paragraph to the definitions
section that says these are the meanings of these terms as used in this spec.)

> 
> License:
Proposed change: Use "state information" and remove "decryption" from "key".

I'm not sure that "state" is accurate, but that's a minor issue.

Is there a reason for removing "decryption"? Note that there is no technical
difference because "Key" is defined to be a decryption key.

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Received on Tuesday, 17 June 2014 21:28:37 UTC