[Bug 16221] editorial: "as such" doesn't fit

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=16221

Daniel Barclay <dsb@smart.net> changed:

           What    |Removed                     |Added
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             Status|RESOLVED                    |REOPENED
         Resolution|WONTFIX                     |

--- Comment #2 from Daniel Barclay <dsb@smart.net> 2012-03-26 18:03:25 UTC ---
(In reply to comment #1)
> The language in the abstract is verbatim text that I was asked to add by the W3
> TAG. I agree it probably could be worded better but I don't think it's worth
> fiddling with further at this point.

If you're uncomfortable fixing text someone gave you, then pass this report
on to them so they can determine how to fix it and give you the fix to
apply.

(The wording is broken.  If it is left unfixed, it makes the document
authors and/or the review process look less than fully literate.  I really
think it should be fixed.)

Daniel

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Received on Monday, 26 March 2012 18:03:28 UTC