[Bug 16204] editorial - sec. 1.2 needs a few commas

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=16204

Daniel Barclay <dsb@smart.net> changed:

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Received on Monday, 5 March 2012 20:28:58 UTC