[Bug 27966] New: Bad Grammar

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=27966

            Bug ID: 27966
           Summary: Bad Grammar
           Product: HTML WG
           Version: unspecified
          Hardware: Macintosh
                OS: MacOS X
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: HTML5 spec
          Assignee: dave.null@w3.org
          Reporter: arlen.walker@gmail.com
        QA Contact: public-html-bugzilla@w3.org
                CC: mike@w3.org, public-html-admin@w3.org,
                    public-html-wg-issue-tracking@w3.org

"Here is a graduation programme the main content section is defined by the use
of the main element."

The sentence doesn't pass muster as good english, I think. Better would be:

"Here is a graduation programme where the main content section is defined by
the use of the main element."

Alternatives might be "in which" in stead of "where" or starting the original
sentence with "In this" instead of "Here is."

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Received on Thursday, 5 February 2015 15:01:13 UTC