[Bug 21347] New: Editorial suggestion for section 2.

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=21347

            Bug ID: 21347
           Summary: Editorial suggestion for section 2.
    Classification: Unclassified
           Product: HTML WG
           Version: unspecified
          Hardware: PC
                OS: Windows NT
            Status: NEW
          Severity: trivial
          Priority: P2
         Component: HTML a11y APIs (editor: Steve Faulkner, Cynthia
                    Shelly)
          Assignee: faulkner.steve@gmail.com
          Reporter: tink@tink.co.uk
        QA Contact: sideshowbarker+html-a11y-api@gmail.com
                CC: mike@w3.org, public-html-admin@w3.org,
                    public-html-bugzilla@w3.org,
                    public-html-wg-issue-tracking@w3.org

The opening paragraph of section 2 (Exposing HTML features that do not directly
map to accessibility API properties), contains the following sentence:

"When HTML roles, states and properties do not directly map to an accessibility
API, and there is a method in the API to
expose a text string, expose the undefined role, states and properties via that
method."

Suggest a slight editorial change to the last clause of the sentence (for
greater clarity):

"When HTML roles, states and properties do not directly map to an accessibility
API, and there is a method in the API to
expose a text string, the undefined role, states and properties should be
exposed via that method."

If "should" is inappropriate language for this section, then "can" could be
used instead:

"When HTML roles, states and properties do not directly map to an accessibility
API, and there is a method in the API to
expose a text string, the undefined role, states and properties can be exposed
via that method."

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Received on Wednesday, 20 March 2013 10:04:15 UTC