Re: Media -- Last Minute MAUR Tweaks

I integrated these changes into the master and gh-pages branches.

On Mon, Nov 30, 2015 at 12:41 PM, Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net> wrote:

> Herewith what I found in my final read through beginning AFTER the TOC
> and the reference to the table that I understand will go away with
> respec changes ...
>
> Sec 3.1 Says "changeset" Should be "changes"
>
> Sec 3.7 has the phrase "strange term." We really mean "unfamiliar term"
> and should make this change.
>
> That's all I found!
>
> Thanks, Shane and Michael!
>
> Janina
>
>
> Shane McCarron writes:
> > I haven't touched the 'front matter' as far as I know.
> >
> > On Mon, Nov 30, 2015 at 10:52 AM, Michael Cooper <cooper@w3.org> wrote:
> >
> > > Just a note I've already created a publication branch, MAUR_NOTE. It
> > > already has a bunch of edits to frontmatter, that I need to preserve.
> I'll
> > > need to merge or cherry pick your edits, but not suck up any
> frontmatter
> > > stuff. So please sequester frontmatter edits into separate commits so
> I can
> > > exclude them. Michael
> > >
> > >
> > > On 30/11/2015 11:31 AM, Shane McCarron wrote:
> > >
> > > I have fixed each item you mentioned.  I have NOT updated the sotd.
> That
> > > language you point out is boiler plate from ReSpec and will get
> eliminated
> > > automatically when we change the document type to NOTE.
> > >
> > > As to the reference to the checklist immediately after the TOC...  This
> > > was a top level section.  Section 1.  And basically empty.  I have
> removed
> > > the section.  The data from that is included in the Appendix and the
> > > Appendix is correct.
> > >
> > > On Mon, Nov 30, 2015 at 10:03 AM, Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>
> wrote:
> > >
> > >> A nit with the up top status data ...
> > >>
> > >> I presume Michael will update Status for the final note and would
> catch
> > >> that we say this will become a recommendation. This was never corect,
> of
> > >> course. It's becoming a note.
> > >>
> > >> 2.)     We have a reference to the checklist immediately following the
> > >> TOC. The reference is incorrect. If desired, we could replicate the
> > >> reference to the table-ized list from Appendix A, but that's NOT
> what's
> > >> currently below the TOC.
> > >>
> > >> Janina
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> --
> > >>
> > >> Janina Sajka,   Phone:  +1.443.300.2200
> > >>                         sip:janina@asterisk.rednote.net
> > >>                 Email:  janina@rednote.net
> > >>
> > >> Linux Foundation Fellow
> > >> Executive Chair, Accessibility Workgroup:        <http://a11y.org>
> > >> http://a11y.org
> > >>
> > >> The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative
> (WAI)
> > >> Chair,  Protocols & Formats      <http://www.w3.org/wai/pf>
> > >> http://www.w3.org/wai/pf
> > >>
> > >>
> > >
> > >
> > > --
> > > Shane McCarron
> > > Managing Director, Applied Testing and Technology, Inc.
> > >
> > >
> > >
> >
> >
> > --
> > Shane McCarron
> > Managing Director, Applied Testing and Technology, Inc.
>
> --
>
> Janina Sajka,   Phone:  +1.443.300.2200
>                         sip:janina@asterisk.rednote.net
>                 Email:  janina@rednote.net
>
> Linux Foundation Fellow
> Executive Chair, Accessibility Workgroup:       http://a11y.org
>
> The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
> Chair,  Protocols & Formats     http://www.w3.org/wai/pf
>
>


-- 
Shane McCarron
Managing Director, Applied Testing and Technology, Inc.

Received on Monday, 30 November 2015 18:52:08 UTC