- From: John Foliot <john@foliot.ca>
- Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2013 13:07:39 -0800
- To: <tink@tink.co.uk>, "'Steve Faulkner'" <faulkner.steve@gmail.com>, "'HTMLWG WG'" <public-html@w3.org>
- Cc: "'HTML Accessibility Task Force'" <public-html-a11y@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <009d01ce191c$4e4fe2c0$eaefa840$@ca>
+1 (grammar matters) JF From: Léonie Watson [mailto:tink@tink.co.uk] Sent: Monday, March 04, 2013 12:29 PM To: 'Steve Faulkner'; 'HTMLWG WG' Cc: 'HTML Accessibility Task Force' Subject: RE: changed advice on use of h1 headings in document outline. -adding to HTML 5.0 Steve Faulkner wrote: “Unless there is any objection I will commit this editorial change[2] to HTML 5.0 next week.” Could I suggest one small change? Instead of: "Sections may contain headings of any rank, but authors are strongly encouraged to use elements of the appropriate rank for the section's nesting level.” Perhaps this: "Sections may contain headings of any rank, and authors are strongly encouraged to use elements of the appropriate rank for the section's nesting level.” Using “… but authors are strongly encouraged…” sets up the expectation that the second clause of the sentence will disagree with the first. Changing it to “… and authors are strongly encouraged…” re-enforces the first clause instead. Léonie. From: Steve Faulkner [mailto:faulkner.steve@gmail.com] Sent: 04 March 2013 07:03 To: HTMLWG WG Cc: HTML Accessibility Task Force Subject: changed advice on use of h1 headings in document outline. -adding to HTML 5.0 Hi all Unless there is any objection I will commit this editorial change[2] to HTML 5.0 next week. regards SteveF On 14 February 2013 13:50, Steve Faulkner <faulkner.steve@gmail.com> wrote: Hi all, as the result of a bug[1] the advice to use h1 in sections has been removed [2] old text: "Sections may contain headings of any rank, but authors are strongly encouraged to either use only h1 elements, or to use elements of the appropriate rank for the section's nesting level." new text: "Sections may contain headings of any rank, but authors are strongly encouraged to use elements of the appropriate rank for the section's nesting level." please review the change [3] at you leisure, feedback welcome. [1] https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=19741 [2] https://github.com/w3c/html/commit/556da56c44a2be0cabb9eccbe51fe583fcdf4332 [3]http://www.w3.org/html/wg/drafts/html/master/sections.html#headings-and-s ections -- with regards Steve Faulkner Technical Director - TPG <http://www.paciellogroup.com/resources/wat-ie-about.html>
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