minor edits to webapp spec

• From: Paul Tyson <phtyson@sbcglobal.net>
• Date: Thu, 19 Sep 2013 23:17:08 -0500
• To: public-expath@w3.org
• Message-Id: <1379650628.5898.0.camel@tristan>

Regarding http://expath.org/spec/webapp/20130401:

Section 2, paragraph 1, sentence 4: 
  s/call/calls/

Section 2, paragraph 1, sentence 6:
  s/actually send/sends/

Section 2, paragraph 4, sentence 2:
  s/request/requests/

Section 2, paragraph 4, sentence 3:
  put "example.org" and "/somehwere" in monospaced font

Section 3, paragraph 1, sentence 2:
  s/build/built/

Section 3, paragraph 2, sentence 1:
  s/build/built/
  s/received/it receives/
  put "http://example.org/" and "/myapp/some/resource" in monospace
font.

Section 3.1, paragraph 1, sentence 1:
  s/requet/request/

Section 3.1, paragraph 1, sentence 2:
  s/remaining items representing/and the remaining items represent/

Section 3.1, paragraph 1, sentence 3:
  put "web:request" in monospace font

Section 3.1/Content, paragraph 1, sentence 1:
  put "web:request" in monospace font

Section 3.1/Content, paragraph 3, last sentence:
  incomplete sentence

Section 3.1/Content, paragraph 5, sentence 1:
  missing period at end of sentence

Section 3.1/Content, paragraph 5, sentence 2:
  s/In case if/If there is only/

Section 3.2, paragraph 3, last sentence:
  s/resolve/resolved/

Section 4, paragraph 2, sentence 2:
  s/condigured/configured/

Section 5.2, paragraph 3, sentence 1:
  s/When a HTTP request hits the web container/When the web container
receives an HTTP request/

Section 5.2, paragraph 3, sentence 2:
  s/is sequence in the/in/

Section 6, paragraph 4, sentence 1:
  s/resp./respectively/

Section 6, example 2:
  webapp namespace should be "http://expath.org/ns/webapp"

Regards,
--Paul

Received on Friday, 20 September 2013 04:17:40 UTC