Re: Working through DUV part 1

Hi Phil, 

Thanks so much for the corrections.  Also the status section is out of date, good catch!  I like the paragraph you provided, it seems very appropriate.

I plan on making edits tonight i hope this wont introduce new problems for you. 

Many thanks again,

Eric S

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> On Jan 14, 2016, at 12:10 PM, Phil Archer <phila@w3.org> wrote:
> 
> Eric, Sumit, Berna,
> 
> I have an idea this won't be the only question I have for you about DUV but I'm working through it and I'll jot down some observations and questions as I go.
> 
> First of all, I've fixed the ReSpec errors so my copy is now OK on that score [1].
> 
> Secondly, in the Status section, the text says "This is a draft document which may be merged into another document or eventually make its way into being a standalone Working Draft." is that still true? I may be wrong but my impression is that the WG finds it easier to keep DUV and DQV separate.
> 
> The Status section needs to have at least one custom paragraph, i.e. some indication of what *this* version is about, it's stability etc. *If* the following is accurate, then something like:
> 
> "This is the second iteration of the vocabulary, developed following extensive consultation among and outside the working group who now regard it as nearing completion. Comment and feedback is sought before the next iteration which is likely to be the final version for the foreseeable future."
> 
> would be appropriate.
> 
> I'm hoping to add links to your SVG next...
> 
> Phil
> 
> [1] http://philarcher1.github.io/dwbp/vocab-du.html
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