- From: Riccardo Albertoni <albertoni@ge.imati.cnr.it>
- Date: Fri, 18 Dec 2015 14:55:59 +0100
- To: Eric Stephan <ericphb@gmail.com>
- Cc: Bernadette Farias Loscio <bfl@cin.ufpe.br>, "Purohit, Sumit" <Sumit.Purohit@pnnl.gov>, DWBP Public List <public-dwbp-wg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAOHhXmS_vVQBs_Zv_zhwsAZEf9ikHYeiC9GLE4juDG8VAQr9pA@mail.gmail.com>
On 18 December 2015 at 14:34, Eric Stephan <ericphb@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Riccardo, > > Thank you for your feedback. My comments below: > > On Fri, Dec 18, 2015 at 3:52 AM, Riccardo Albertoni < > albertoni@ge.imati.cnr.it> wrote: > >> Dear Bernadette, Eric and Sumit, >> >> Thanks for your work on DUV. >> >> I took a quick look at the data usage document and I have some very >> minor issues, you might want to consider >> >> -section 2, namespace table: the dqv namespace is missing; >> >> >> dqv namespace added. > > >> -section 7.4, duv:UsageTool has rdfs:label "Usage Actor"; >> >> >> label corrected. > >> - Four open issues associated to DUV in the tracking system, but only >> one is mentioned in the DUV Draft. Are you going to include the other >> issues in the DUV draft? >> > >> I looked through the open issues and only 219 seemed relevant to DUV. > The others looked mis-assigned. I saw an issue on open and closed data. > I'd feel more comfortable talking about this as a working group than adding > it in the document. It doesn't seem like a DUV issue. > >> >> - please consider to mention the namespaces in front of each class >> depicted in the class diagram. Otherwise, when reading the document on B/W >> printed paper, It is impossible to figure out the vocabulary from >> which the classes are borrowed ... I know,.. I am probably one of the >> last persons reading things on B/W paper ... I guess people reading the >> DUV with B/W ebook reader might have the same problem ;) >> >> >> I added namespaces. Good point about the B/W printouts. > > >> A further comment on the diagram: >> Some classes are repeated more than once (e.g., skos:Concept, >> oa:Annotation, foaf:Agent). Probably, that is because the DUV diagram is >> not a "planar graph" and if you do not duplicate classes you get a diagram >> with very intricate connections. >> Even If I can guess the reasons why you have duplicated classes in the >> diagram, I am not sure that I am comfortable with this choice. I might >> be wrong but figuring out that a same class is represented three times >> might be as difficult as or even more difficult that digging into a >> diagram with intricate connections ... >> >> > >> Hmmmm Yes we did this to make the diagram easier on the eyes. Going > back to old school techniques we used to make connections across diagrams > with labeled pointers the labels sat inside a circle at the end of the > line. Would something like that be confusing? > perhaps, then I would rather leave it as it is ;) >> Cheers, >> Riccardo >> >> >> -- >> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- >> Riccardo Albertoni >> Istituto per la Matematica Applicata e Tecnologie Informatiche "Enrico >> Magenes" >> Consiglio Nazionale delle Ricerche >> via de Marini 6 - 16149 GENOVA - ITALIA >> tel. +39-010-6475624 - fax +39-010-6475660 >> e-mail: Riccardo.Albertoni@ge.imati.cnr.it >> Skype: callto://riccardoalbertoni/ >> LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/in/riccardoalbertoni >> www: http://www.ge.imati.cnr.it/Albertoni >> http://purl.oclc.org/NET/riccardoAlbertoni >> FOAF:http://purl.oclc.org/NET/RiccardoAlbertoni/foaf >> > > > -- > This message has been scanned for viruses and dangerous content by > *E.F.A. Project* <http://www.efa-project.org>, and is believed to be > clean. -- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Riccardo Albertoni Istituto per la Matematica Applicata e Tecnologie Informatiche "Enrico Magenes" Consiglio Nazionale delle Ricerche via de Marini 6 - 16149 GENOVA - ITALIA tel. +39-010-6475624 - fax +39-010-6475660 e-mail: Riccardo.Albertoni@ge.imati.cnr.it Skype: callto://riccardoalbertoni/ LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/in/riccardoalbertoni www: http://www.ge.imati.cnr.it/Albertoni http://purl.oclc.org/NET/riccardoAlbertoni FOAF:http://purl.oclc.org/NET/RiccardoAlbertoni/foaf
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