Re: Feedback on current editor draft of BPs

Hi Bernadette,

Thanks for considering all the comments :-)
As you saw I just commented further (at the bottom) on your comment "e70fc2c
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/e70fc2cba67d453b7e6d163cffb68a14bf83cb5a> I
used the http://www.geonames.org/3399415 and it worked. Is it really
necessary to change?"because I think that the change is indeed needed to
get working LD links.

Regarding "c7496c2
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/c7496c219747b2138ccb7d1570a1880cb210de51>
The
example shows the inclusion of the locale parameters metadata, followed by
a locale-neutral representation of bus fare data. The example has to parts:
one that shows that metadata and the other one to show an example of
representation. I suggest to leave it like this." I understand these are
two different parts but still think it's confusing to see them together.
Maybe you could just split that code into two <pre> ?

Best Regards,
Christophe

On 28 November 2016 at 12:41, Bernadette Farias Lóscio <bfl@cin.ufpe.br>
wrote:

> Hi Christophe,
>
> Thanks a lot for your detailed review! I checked each one of the commits
> and most of them are editorial changes and can easily be incorporated on
> the document.
>
> I'd like to kindly ask you to take a look on comments that I included on
> the pull request [1] and please let me know if you are ok with them.
>
> kind regards,
> Bernadette
>
> [1] https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/pull/474
>
> 2016-10-06 19:46 GMT-03:00 Christophe Guéret <christophe.gueret@gmail.com>
> :
>
>> Dear everyone,
>>
>> Congrats on all the great work :-)
>>
>> I have (finally !) been through the latest draft of the best practices
>> and made a number of comments which I just proposed with a pull request (
>> https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/pull/474). Hope you will find those useful.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Christophe
>>
>
>
>
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> Bernadette Farias Lóscio
> Centro de Informática
> Universidade Federal de Pernambuco - UFPE, Brazil
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