- From: Riccardo Albertoni <albertoni@ge.imati.cnr.it>
- Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2016 15:08:55 +0200
- To: Amrapali Jyotindra Zaveri <amrapali@stanford.edu>, public-dwbp-comments <public-dwbp-comments@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAOHhXmSh8TSKbefVFHKo+O0hKnYPpa6P8QX2GbB9jyuxSreDew@mail.gmail.com>
Hi Amrapali, Thanks for your suggestions, see my comments below. Il giorno mar 14 giu 2016 alle ore 04:42 Amrapali Jyotindra Zaveri < amrapali@stanford.edu> ha scritto: > Hi all, > > I looked at the DQV Vocabulary and have a few comments/suggestions: > > There is a typo in my name in the references: “Amrapalia” should be > “Amrapali”. > > Fixed, sorry if I keep mistaking your name. > In Section 5.10, > - In the second example, is it “novel preferred” or “novel, preferred”? > it is without comma.... > - This sentence "The quality assessment of the "label importing" can > depend on two extra parameters: onProperty andonLanguage, respectively > the SKOS property and the language tag considered for measuring the > completeness gains.” sounds strange. > I have changed this sentence as in the following: The quality assessment of the "label importing" depends on two extra parameters: onProperty and onLanguage, which are respectively, the SKOS property and the language tag considered for measuring the completeness gains. Does this sound less strange? > In Section 5.11 > - "GeoDCAT-AP enables to express” rephrase to "GeoDCAT-AP allows to > express”. > > Thanks, done! In Section 5.1.3 > - In Example 4, there is an extra space between “to” and “methodology”. > Thanks, done! > In Section 6.3 > - I would use “Linked Data” both in the title and first sentence. > I have capitalized "linked data" everywhere, and used Linked Data in both title and first sentence. Cheers, Riccardo > > Thanks. > Regards, > Amrapali Zaveri, PhD > Dumontier Lab, Stanford University > Twitter: @amrapaliz >
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