- From: Chris Lilley <chris@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 28 Feb 2017 15:48:03 -0500
- To: public-digipub-ig@w3.org
On 2017-02-28 04:43, Ivan Herman wrote: > Dear all, > > I have made the editorial changes on the charter, as agreed on > yesterday's call. It is always a good idea to check, however, to see > if I made a mistake… See > > https://w3c.github.io/dpubwg-charter/ In general this looks good and i am glad to see it uses the charter template which will ease AC review. In particular, the scope section is good (and that is more important than the list of deliverables, actually). I have a few detailed comments on the charter: 1) License. I strongly suggest changing to the W3C Software and Document license. This is the same as the document license (for the actual document text) and the same as the software license for examples, code snippets etc which is important as the Document License *forbids copying or modifying examples*. And we want people to be able to do that. 2) History You can comment out the history for a new charter, and un-comment it when the charter gets extended or otherwise modified after initial approval. 3) CSS WG The current text "A number of features described in the Web Publication UCR document (e.g., personalization) may require new CSS functionalities " is true, but says nothing about coordination. Is the expectation that new capabilities are developed in the DPubWG? Developed jointly? Developed by providing UC&R and asking CSS WG to develop them? Something else? Also, could DPubWG help CSS WG in the development and testing of existing and new capabilities that are needed by Digital Publishing. 4) Reference drafts Is it correct that none of the proposed deliverables have reference drafts? See http://w3c.github.io/charter-drafts/charter-template.html#normative 5) Typos. s/earlierst/earliest s/A Web Publication< (WP)/A Web Publication (WP) s/ARIA Module&2.0/ARIA Module 2.0 -- Chris Lilley @svgeesus Technical Director @ W3C W3C Strategy Team, Core Web Design W3C Architecture & Technology Team, Core Web & Media
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