- From: Brady Duga <duga@google.com>
- Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2013 09:38:38 -0800
- To: Markus Gylling <markus.gylling@gmail.com>
- Cc: W3C Public Digital Publishing IG Mailing List <public-digipub-ig-comment@w3.org>, W3C Digital Publishing IG <public-digipub-ig@w3.org>
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Looks good, though I just noticed there are 2 number 19s. Might want to promote one before you send this on. On Thu, Nov 7, 2013 at 4:59 AM, Markus Gylling <markus.gylling@gmail.com>wrote: > Hi all, > thanks for your work on this. Below is a list that intends to compile your > comments, starting with the list Brady provided, and comments from Dave, > Eric, Jean et. al. inserted in natural order. I have left out the > discussion on positional pseudo-elements, as there seemed to be agreement > that this is not LC-level stuff (but this proposition could/should of > course be forwarded to the CSS WG via other channels). > > I’ll let this sit until noon PST awaiting any final comments you might > have (did I miss something? more non-LC stuff included that we want to save > for later? etc) and then send our reply to Bert. > > Again, thanks! /markus > > --- begin --- > 1. It would be great to keep the ‘hanging-punctuation’ property, though I > understand it is awaiting implementations. What is the timeline here? That > is, when would an implementation need to appear in order to preserve this > property? > > This is certainly important to us. Antenna House has implemented this, and > it's on the roadmap for Prince. > > 2. In section 1.3, after the example: > "Within this specification, the ambiguous term character is used as a > friendlier synonym for grapheme cluster. See Characters and Properties for > how to determine the Unicode properties of a character." > "A letter for the purpose of this specification is a character belonging > to one of the Letter or Number general categories in Unicode. [UAX44]" > If I replace 'character' in the second paragraph with 'grapheme cluster', > I am not sure I get a reasonable answer. For instance, is U+0067 + U+0308 > a letter? I don't think U+0308 is, does that disqualify the whole cluster? > Or is this a different use of the term character? Does Unicode define such > clusters as belonging to all the groups all the code points belong to? > > 3. The only place the spec mentions that text-transform should affect line > breaking is in an informative example (#2), at least that I saw. Should > this be mentioned in a normative section? Some line breaking changes are > obvious (for instance, changing the width of the glyphs will alter line > breaking), but others are more obscure (for instance, transformation to > full width). > > 4. From 5.1, last bullet point: > "For line breaking in/around ruby, the base text is considered part of the > same inline formatting context as its surrouding content, but the ruby text > is not: i.e. line breaking opportunities between the ruby element and its > surrounding content are determined as if the ruby base were inline and the > ruby text were not there." [Also, note the typo: surrouding] > The first part of this sounds like breaks are allowed in a single run of > base text (difficult, I assume), but the second part sounds like breaks are > only allowed at boundaries of the ruby element. It seems like, in practice, > breaks are allowed anywhere in a ruby element a break would be allowed if > such a location is also a base text boundary. > For example, consider this snippet: > <p>だ<ruby>大分<rt>だいぶ</rt>日数<rt>ひかず</rt></ruby>が</p> > From "the base text is considered part of the same inline formatting > context as its surrouding content, but the ruby text is not", I might > imagine breaks as though the text were written > だ[1]大[2]分[3]日[4]数[5]が > But, this: "i.e. line breaking opportunities between the ruby element and > its surrounding content" seems to imply this only covers line breaks at the > boundary of the ruby element itself. In which case I would get: > だ[1]大分日数[5]が > However, I would expect the correct breaking would be neither of those, > but rather: > だ[1]大分[3]日数[5]が > I am not certain how I can interpret the spec to generate those line > breaks. > > 5. In "5.2. Breaking Rules for Punctuation", in this sentence and the one > below it that is similar: > "If the content language is Chinese or Japanese, then additionally allow > (but otherwise forbid) for ‘normal’ and ‘loose’:" > It's not clear to me what the 'otherwise' applies to - is it the 'normal' > and 'loose', so it is forbidden in strict when the language is Chinese or > Japanese? Or does it apply to the language as well, so it is forbidden in > strict for Chinese and Japanese, and for any value for all other languages? > If the latter, then the implication is that in eg English, breaks before > U+2010 are forbidden. However, the later clarifying note seems to indicate > that non-CJK text is only affected when the language is Chinese or Japanese. > > 6. In "6.1. Hyphenation Control", the sentence: "The UA is therefore only > required to automatically hyphenate text for which [...]" > Is it the case that a UA is ever *required* to automatically hyphenate? > Perhaps this should be weakened to "Therefore, if no language is specified > or no hyphenation resource is available to the UA for a specified language, > the UA may choose to treat 'auto' as 'manual'." > > Section 6.1 also states, "Conditional hyphenation characters inside a > word, if present, take priority over automatic resources when determining > hyphenation opportunities within the word." Is this a strong-enough > statement? We've seen many cases where a word will hyphenate one character > away from a soft hyphen. > > 6.1 In example 8, there is an extra nun in نوشتنن, at the end. I think it > should be نوشتن. > > 7. Not really wrong, but the order of property names in the title for 6.2 > is the opposite of the order just below, in the definition, > ‘word-wrap’/‘overflow-wrap’ vs overflow-wrap/word-wrap. Just a little weird. > > 8. "6.2. Overflow Wrapping", so sayeth Yoda: > "[...] and grapheme clusters must together stay as one unit." Maybe "stay > together" instead? > > 9. In "7.1. Text Alignment", "text-align: start end" sounds a lot like > "text-align-last: *", giving special treatment to the first line instead of > the last line, with less control. Perhaps there should be a separate > property for controlling the first line alignment, just like there is for > controlling the last line. Then text-align could become a shorthand. For > example: > > text-align: center == text-align-first: center, text-align-middle: center, > text-align-last: auto > text-align: center right == text-align-first: center, text-align-middle: > center, text-align-last: right > text-align: left center right == text-align-first: left, > text-align-middle: center, text-align-last: right > > This makes the proposed 'text-align: start end' become 'text-align: start > end end' instead. > Of course, the down side is this would require two new properties > ("text-align-first", "text-align-middle"). Not sure if this is worth > considering at this point, but it seems odd to handle this in different > ways for different special lines. Perhaps drop 'start end' for now and > reconsider for level 2? > > Sometimes we need to force a line-break inside a paragraph for various > reasons > [novelists-sometimes-string-together-dozens-of-words-with-hyphens-leaving-no-natural-break-points]. > Having text-align-last control this is almost never what we want. In the > most common case, we want the last line left-aligned and all other lines > justified, as in most books published in the last five hundred years. > Separating text-align-middle from text-align-last would be very helpful. > > 10. What impact do zero-width letters and zero-width word-separators have > on the inter-word and distribute text-justify values? > > 11. I take exception to example 10 in 7.3.5. Both the greedy algorithm and > the Knuth/Plass algorithm are O(n). What performance metrics are you using > to determine the relative speed of these algorithms? Additionally, > Knuth/Plass is easily adapted to other languages, so it applies equally to > example 11. Perhaps "harder to implement" instead? > > 12. "8.1. Word Spacing": Can this property be used to make words overlap? > That is, are values less than -100% allowed? 'letter-spacing' says there > may be UA limitations for such things. > > 13. letter-spacing says it doesn't apply at the start/end of a line. > Should there be similar text be in word-spacing? > > 14. At the end of word-spacing (just after example 13), the text > "Word-separator characters include [...]" - is this considered an > exhaustive list? If so, this should be made clear, otherwise some sort of > guidelines for deciding what else might be a word-separator would be useful. > > 15. In "8.2. Tracking", just after example 14: "[...] to the innermost > element element that contains the two characters [...]" > Just one element? > > 16. And just after example 15: "Letter-spacing ignores zero-width > characters (such as those from the Unicode Cf category)." Does this mean > characters that are defined to be zero-width, or characters whose width > might be zero? For instance, given: > > span.zero { display: inline-block; width: 0; } > p {letter-spacing: 1em;} > > <p>a<span class="zero">b</span>c</p> > > Would this be viewed as "a bc" (1em after 'a', zero-width 'b', 1em after > end of 'b', 'c') or as 'a' with 'b' and 'c' on top of each other 1em later? > > We are disappointed that maximum and minimum values for word-spacing and > letter-spacing were removed in this draft. Better control over > justification is a key requirement for us. > > 17. In "9.1. First Line Indentation", it is not clear to me what > 'each-line' is doing. Does this simply make the indent of lines after hard > line breaks indent, and they wouldn't otherwise? If so, perhaps it should > say "In addition to the first line of a block container each line after a > forced line break are also affected. Lines after a soft wrap break are > still not affected." Or maybe there is something else going on I just don't > understand. > > I found this section a bit confusing. Perhaps examples of "hanging" and > "each-line" would be helpful. > > 18. In "9.2. Hanging Punctuation", the 'Animatable:' table entry has a > spurious gt ('>'). > > 19. Appendix A, steps 5.iv and 5.v - how do you do letter and word spacing > without knowing the font in use? For instance, a percent value for letter > spacing depends on the advance measure of the character, which will depend > on the current font. > > 19. Appendix B: > "[...] is to help UA developers to implement default stylesheet [...]" - > 'a default stylesheet'? Or maybe 'the default stylesheet'? Or even 'default > stylesheets'? > > --- end --- > > On 05 Nov 2013, at 17:55, Cramer, Dave <Dave.Cramer@hbgusa.com> wrote: > > On 11/5/13 11:25 AM, "Brady Duga" <duga@google.com> wrote: > > I was also thinking about different margins based on page-facing. Do we > need to target new, left and right pages? Or even/odd pages? Seems like > this is a complex enough discussion to avoid in LC comments. > > > PrinceXML uses margin-inside and margin-outside. There's been some talk > in the CSS WG about allowing element styling based on @page context (:left, > :right, :first). > > So much of layout involves position—it's OK to hyphenate a word, except > when it's the last word on a left-hand page. I sometimes feel that our > biggest problem isn't that CSS is missing some features, it's that CSS > doesn't allow us to target the situations we want to change. The first page > of a chapter, the last word on the page, the second star to the right… > > Dave > > > > ------------------------------ > This may contain confidential material. If you are not an intended > recipient, please notify the sender, delete immediately, and understand > that no disclosure or reliance on the information herein is permitted. > Hachette Book Group may monitor email to and from our network. > > >
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