Re: [discovery-api] typo in 5.1 5. of last draft from Rich Tibbett on 2013-10-28 (public-device-apis@w3.org from October 2013)

From: Rich Tibbett <richt@opera.com>
Date: Mon, 28 Oct 2013 11:34:15 +1100
To: Jean-Claude Dufourd <jean-claude.dufourd@telecom-paristech.fr>
Cc: Device APIs Working Group <public-device-apis@w3.org>
Message-ID: <CAAsrAZB_wz9AeNysLQBmmEL9=YnFkmopy_WKb7Ye0pdF4Ru4Xw@mail.gmail.com>

On Fri, Oct 25, 2013 at 1:36 AM, Jean-Claude Dufourd
<jean-claude.dufourd@telecom-paristech.fr> wrote:
> In latest draft, section 5.1, bullet 5. the sentence:
>
> "If type is an array consisting of one or more valid service type tokens,
> then let requested control types by the value of type, removing any
> non-valid service type tokens from the resulting array."
>
> does not make sense in English.
>
> I suspect the "by" in the middle should be a "be"

Fixed!

br/ Rich

Received on Monday, 28 October 2013 00:34:44 UTC