- From: <Frederick.Hirsch@nokia.com>
- Date: Fri, 7 Jan 2011 21:29:55 +0100
- To: <public-device-apis@w3.org>
- CC: <Frederick.Hirsch@nokia.com>
I've made the following editorial updates to the "Device API Access Control Use Cases and Requirements" editors draft [1]: + Updated introduction to remove explicit references to framework and charter, add mention and reference to privacy requirements. + Revise by moving some requirements from "Operator-enforced" user story section to other sections where appropriate and reframing not in terms of policy-framework implementation. + Update 2.1.1 to remove "glances at privacy policy" since we know this has issues, and added note about possible lack of "informed consent" in this privacy model. + clarify 2.1.3 last two bullets, mention cert revocation in 2.2.2 + Revise introduction in security threats section, add media privacy threat, rename headings + fix various spelling errors, typos, validation errors and some minor formatting update It is not clear to me that the user story "2.3.3 User Story: Transfering remembered choices to another device" has to be a case of delegated authority - for example a user might wish to transfer settings across devices via a web service or other mechanism without delegation... Shall we publish an update to this document? regards, Frederick Frederick Hirsch Nokia [1] http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/policy-reqs/
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