RE: updates to Policy Framework and Profile

Hi Frederick, all,

While reviewing the framework document, I encountered the following:

1) Lack of definitions for 'access request' and 'access query'. I assume
they are the same? It might be good to describe it in a subsection under
core concepts. 
2) Would it make sense to describe all the steps illustrated in logical
model under "4.2 Processing Rules" section? Right now, it is split into
"Processing Rules" and "Feature and Capability Processing Rules" which
is somewhat mis-leading. For e.g. are these done independently or is it
reasonable to say that they may be both may be evaluated in one shot?
3) As stated earlier (in one of the conference calls), I think we need
to understand the relation of this policy framework with the widgets
specifications (i.e. configuration file that includes <feature> and WARP
<access>). For example, how does the policy get evaluated in this case
when both a policy file is present and "policy type" elements such as
<feature> and <access> are declared in the widget package?

Regards,
Suresh

 


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Sent: Monday, June 21, 2010 9:43 AM
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Subject: updates to Policy Framework and Profile

I have made a number of changes to the Poilcy Framework and Profile
documents since last Thursday:

1. Edits to Framework based on Dom's editorial suggestions

2. Some additional restructuring of Framework document, added sections
for concepts including trust, features and capabilities. Added material
on trust from Nokia contribution.  Consolidated attribute definitions 

3. Profile - Moved attribute definitions from Framework to Profile

4. Profile - Incorporated examples from example document

5. Fixed numerous validation errors in Framework and Profile, both
validate now. Fixed markup for RFC language to ReSpec convention, got
rid of most <em> markup, using <code> where appropriate.

6. Fixed link checker issues in Framework/Profile, both ok now (though
some same document links may be to wrong destination since there were
duplicate ids defined.)

7. Removed Marcin from Policy editors list.

Dom also fixed additional formatting issues, thanks Dom.

I'll be looking at the content and organization more, but wanted to get
some of the basics out of the way in the first pass. 

Please review the documents so we can plan to publish later this week.

Thanks

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia





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