Feedback on Device API Policy Examples

Dear,

Here are some feedback on the version on W3C Editor's Draft 10 June 2010 at
http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/policy/Examples.html

In 2.1

Examples are not well formed (taking into account that this document is
partial)

Example 1 and 2 : s/<--/<!--/ (appears at least 4 times)

Example 1 : replace "</target>" by "</subject></target>"

Example 3 : replace '<subject-match attr="id" match="
http://maliciouswidget1.example.org">' by '<subject-match attr="id" match="
http://maliciouswidget1.example.org"/>'

There is no namespace definition for "param" prefix

In Reference

Please do at least reference where the grammar of this XML is defined (in my
understanding that should be
http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/policy/Framework.html )

Regards,

Mohamed ZERGAOUI


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