- From: Matt Womer <mdw@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 13 Dec 2007 11:54:41 -0500
- To: Rotan Hanrahan <rotan.hanrahan@mobileaware.com>
- Cc: José Manuel Cantera Fonseca <jmcf@tid.es>, "Jo Rabin" <jrabin@mtld.mobi>, <public-ddwg@w3.org>
Hi All, I've been working on this publication with Rotan, and it occurs to me that we never discussed a shortname, I proposed: ddr-core-vocabulary Which would result in URIs like: http://www.w3.org/TR/NOTE-ddr-core-vocabulary-@@date@@/ and http://www.w3.org/TR/ddr-core-vocabulary Any objections to those? -Matt On Dec 12, 2007, at 9:37 AM, Rotan Hanrahan wrote: > As the group has already taken a formal resolution to publish the > document based on the Editor’s draft at the time of the resolution, > these and any subsequent comments regarding the document will be > directed towards the subsequent publication. Given that there are > several outstanding issues to consider (e.g. the definitions of > aspects, some additional properties etc.), the subsequent > publication will involve substantive updates. > > I urge the document editors to take on board any comments that have > appeared since the publication resolution and to reflect these in > the ongoing “editor’s draft”. > > We will be seeking further comments (from the public) when the > current draft is published, hopefully in the next few days. > > ---Rotan. > > From: public-ddwg-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ddwg-request@w3.org] > On Behalf Of José Manuel Cantera Fonseca > Sent: 12 December 2007 14:21 > To: Jo Rabin > Cc: public-ddwg@w3.org > Subject: [VOC] Comments on the current version of the vocabulary > > Commenting [1] > > Editorial Comments: > > Abstract > --------- > + This document describes the Device Description Repository Core > Vocabulary for Content Adaptation in the Mobile Web, described in > the charter of the Device Descriptions Working Group, as well as the > process by which the vocabulary was defined > > Introduction > ------------- > > + The vocabulary makes reference to the ontology for the Web > Delivery Context which is being developed by the UWA [reference to > the UWA -WG] Working Group. [UWA-Ontology]. > > + I would suggest to drop the sentence "Where necessary, the > ontology can be extended." or to rephrase it to make it more clear > the intended meaning > > 3 Properties > ------------- > > + Reading the document is not clear to me what is the actual > property identifier. I know that it is supposed to be the name in > the section title such as "3.1 vendor" but I think it will be better > to make explicit the actual property identifier. Suggested: > > 3.1 'vendor' property > > 3.1.1 Description > > bla,bla > > 3.1.2 Property Identifier > vendor > > 3.1.3 type > bla, bla > > + 3.5.6 Identified as an important property by the DDWG in its Top N > finding. [Put a reference to the document] Present in UAProf [Put a > reference to UAProf] > > B Acknowledgements > > A small change, > > + José Manuel Cantera Fonseca, Telefónica Investigación y Desarrollo > > --- Additional Comments --- > > + The document does not talk about namespaces and property > namespacing, I think it is important to indicate that the Core > Vocabulary Properties are within a namespace identified by a URI to > be defined > + Enumerations. I think we need an XMLSchema definition of the > enumerations described for certain properties in the vocabulary, > such as inputDevices. Also, the same comment as in the property id > applies here. We need to make explicit that the values put in the > table under the value column are the actual values that the > enumeration can contain i.e. those strings. I think this can be > made explicit by means of the XMLSchema enumeration definition. > Last but not least, I'm a bit worried about the 'other' value you > mention in the draft. > I think we need to drop it from the value column and say that > specific implementations can provide more values to this enumeration. > > Nothing more so far > > Best Regards > > [1] http://www.w3.org/2005/MWI/DDWG/drafts/corevocabulary/071204.html
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