- From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 18 May 2006 12:57:33 +0900
- To: public-ddwg@w3.org
Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "Device Description Landscape"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-dd-landscape-20060210/
Thu, 09 Feb 2006 14:37:27 GMT
1st WD
[[[
1 Introduction
Web access from mobile devices suffers from problems that make the
Web unattractive for most mobile users. W3C's Mobile Web Initiative
(MWI) proposes to address these issues through a concerted effort of
key players in the mobile value chain, including authoring tool
vendors, content providers, handset manufacturers, browser vendors
and mobile operators.
The objective of the W3C Mobile Web Initiative is to enable access to
the Web from mobile devices. It is recognized that this will
generally require adaptation of web content and therefore an
understanding of the different characteristics, features, behaviors
and limitations of mobile handsets.
Within the MWI, the mission of the Device Description Working Group
(DDWG) is to foster the provision of, and access to, these consistent
and reliable, Device Descriptions that can be used to help develop
and deliver high-quality mobile web applications to the world's
mobile devices.
]]]
-- Device Description Landscape
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-dd-landscape-20060210/#sec-objectivescope
Thu, 09 Feb 2006 14:37:27 GMT
Editorial:
The introduction of a specification is used to give context about the
technology itself and not that much about the group which has done
it. We suggest to remove everything which is related to Mobile Web
Initiative and or Device Descriptiong Working Group when not related
to the technology itself. Many things in this section seems to belong
to the Status section, more than an introduction.
The whole document seems a bit strange, as it looks like more a white
paper than a usual W3C Note.
--
Karl Dubost - http://www.w3.org/People/karl/
W3C Conformance Manager, QA Activity Lead
QA Weblog - http://www.w3.org/QA/
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