dap commit: better abstract by Marcos

changeset:   89:e23ee7ea9b1f
tag:         tip
user:        Anssi Kostiainen <anssi.kostiainen@nokia.com>
date:        Tue May 15 10:12:09 2012 +0300
files:       proximity/Overview.html
description:
better abstract by Marcos


diff -r 04cacd903e10 -r e23ee7ea9b1f proximity/Overview.html
--- a/proximity/Overview.html	Fri May 11 07:14:48 2012 -0700
+++ b/proximity/Overview.html	Tue May 15 10:12:09 2012 +0300
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@
   </head>
   <body>
     <section id="abstract">
-      This specification defines an event interface that provides information about the
-      proximity of the hosting device to the nearby physical object.
+      This specification defines a means to receive events that correspond to
+      a proximity sensor detecting the presence of a physical object.
     </section>
     
     <section id="sotd">

Received on Tuesday, 15 May 2012 07:23:28 UTC