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 http://www.w3.org/TR/.
 </em>
 </p>
-<del class="diff-old">This
-is
+<p>
+This
+<del class="diff-old">is
 a
 First
 Public
@@ -641,9 +642,18 @@
 Draft
 of
 a
+</del>
 document
+<ins class="diff-new">outlines
+privacy
+best
+practices
+for
+web
+applications
+</ins>
 that
-is
+<del class="diff-old">is
 expected
 to
 be
@@ -662,22 +672,134 @@
 Working
 Group
 anticipates
+</del>
+<ins class="diff-chg">may
+rely
+upon
+device
+APIs.
+These
+web
+application
+practices
+impact
+the
+user
+of
+the
+web
+application
+but
+are
+not
+directly
+related
+</ins>
 to
-eventually
+<del class="diff-old">eventually
 publish
 a
 stabilized
 version
+</del>
+<ins class="diff-chg">the
+API
+definition
+itself,
+but
+rather
+the
+context
+of
+the
+use
+of
+those
+APIs
+by
+the
+web
+application.
+</ins></p><p><ins class="diff-chg">
+Since
+the
+last
+publication
+</ins>
 of
 this
-document
+<del class="diff-old">document
 as
+</del>
+<ins class="diff-chg">document,
+</ins>
 a
-W3C
+<del class="diff-old">W3C
 Working
 Group
 Note.
 </del>
+<ins class="diff-chg">new
+best
+practice
+related
+to
+"active
+consent"
+has
+been
+added
+(best
+practice
+6),
+"informed
+consent"
+is
+noted
+in
+an
+existing
+practice
+(best
+practice
+3),
+various
+editorial
+wording
+changes
+have
+been
+made,
+and
+the
+practices
+have
+also
+been
+renumbered
+to
+accomodate
+the
+addition
+of
+the
+new
+practice.
+A
+</ins><a href="WG-NOTE-diff.html"><ins class="diff-chg">
+red-line
+showing
+the
+changes
+since
+the
+previous
+publication
+</ins></a><ins class="diff-chg">
+is
+available.
+</ins>
+</p>
 <p>
 This
 document
@@ -2580,11 +2702,12 @@
 and
 possible
 countermeasures.
-</ins></li><li><a href="#bp-use-https"><ins class="diff-chg">
-Best
+</ins></li><li>
+<a href="#bp-use-https">
+<ins class="diff-new">Best
 Practice
 11
-</ins></a>:<ins class="diff-chg">
+</ins></a>:<ins class="diff-new">
 Maintain
 the
 confidentiality
@@ -2596,66 +2719,14 @@
 for
 example
 using
-</ins><code><ins class="diff-chg">
+</ins><code><ins class="diff-new">
 HTTPS
-</ins></code><ins class="diff-chg">
+</ins></code><ins class="diff-new">
 for
 transport
 rather
 than
-</ins><code><ins class="diff-chg">
+</ins><code><ins class="diff-new">
 HTTP
-</ins></code>.</li><li><a href="#bp-secure-storage"><ins class="diff-chg">
-Best
-Practice
-12
-</ins></a>:<ins class="diff-chg">
-Maintain
-the
-confidentiality
-of
-user
-data
-in
-storage.
-</ins></li><li><a href="#bp-audit-log"><ins class="diff-chg">
-Best
-Practice
-13
-</ins></a>:<ins class="diff-chg">
-Control
-and
-log
-access
-to
-data.
-</ins></li></ul></div><div id="references" class="appendix section"><h2><span class="secno"><ins class="diff-chg">
-A.
-</ins></span><ins class="diff-chg">
-References
-</ins></h2><div id="normative-references" class="section"><h3><span class="secno"><ins class="diff-chg">
-A.1
-</ins></span><ins class="diff-chg">
-Normative
-references
-</ins></h3><p><ins class="diff-chg">
-No
-normative
-references.
-</ins></p></div><div id="informative-references" class="section"><h3><span class="secno"><ins class="diff-chg">
-A.2
-</ins></span><ins class="diff-chg">
-Informative
-references
-</ins></h3><dl class="bibliography"><dt id="bib-CONSENT-EU-WP187"><ins class="diff-chg">
-[CONSENT-EU-WP187]
-</ins></dt><dd><ins class="diff-chg">
-WP189,
-</ins><a href="http://ec.europa.eu/justice/policies/privacy/docs/wpdocs/2011/wp187_en.pdf"><cite><ins class="diff-chg">
-Opinion
-15/2011
-on
-the
-definition
-</ins>
+</ins></code>.</li><li><a href="#bp 
 

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