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- Date: Tue, 31 Jan 2012 17:40:37 +0000
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changeset: 47:8fdb8dffe5be
tag: tip
user: Mounir Lamouri <mounir.lamouri@gmail.com>
date: Tue Jan 31 18:40:09 2012 +0100
files: network-api/index.html
description:
Few language corrections
diff -r 84a2fb7b753b -r 8fdb8dffe5be network-api/index.html
--- a/network-api/index.html Tue Jan 31 18:00:31 2012 +0100
+++ b/network-api/index.html Tue Jan 31 18:40:09 2012 +0100
@@ -159,20 +159,21 @@
<dd>
<p>
A connection is <dfn>metered</dfn> when the user's connection is subject to a limitation from his Internet Service Provider
- strong enough to request web applications to be gentle with the bandwidth usage.
+ strong enough to request web applications to be careful with the bandwidth usage.
</p>
<div class="note">
- What is a metered connection is voluntarily left to the <a>user agent</a>. It would not be possible to give an exhaustive
- way of all limitations considered strong enough to flag the connection has metered and even if doable, some limitations can be
+ What is a metered connection is voluntarily left to the <a>user agent</a> to judge. It would not be possible to give an exhaustive
+ list of limitations considered strong enough to flag the connection as metered and even if doable, some limitations can be
considered strong or weak depending on the context.<br>
- Examples of metered connections are mobile connection with a small bandwidth quota or a connection with a pay-per use.
+ Examples of metered connections are mobile connections with a small bandwidth quota or connections with a pay-per use plan.
</div>
<p>
The attribute SHOULD return true if the connection with the Document's subdomain is <a title='metered'>metered</a> and false otherwise.
If the implementation is not able to know the status of the connection or if the user is offline, it MUST return false.
</p>
<div class="note">
- If not able to know if a connection is metered, a <a>user agent</a> could ask the user about the status of his current connection. For example, a preference letting the user say if the mobile connection used on the device is metered.
+ If not able to know if a connection is metered, a <a>user agent</a> could ask the user about the status of his current connection.
+ For example, a preference could let the user define if the mobile connection used on the device is metered.
</div>
</dd>
<dt>[TreatNonCallableAsNull] attribute Function? onchange</dt>
@@ -186,7 +187,7 @@
</p>
<p>
- When the user goes online or offline, in addition of the <code>change</code> event fired on the <code>Connection</code>
+ When the user goes online or offline, in addition to the <code>change</code> event fired on the <code>Connection</code>
object, the <a>user agent</a> has to <a>fire a simple event</a> named either <code>online</code> or <code>offline</code>
depending on the applicable value, as defined in [[!HTML5]].
</p>
Received on Tuesday, 31 January 2012 17:40:39 UTC