dap commit: Language fixes and applying Robin Berjon comments.

changeset:   48:e79e160c329e
tag:         tip
user:        Mounir Lamouri <mounir.lamouri@gmail.com>
date:        Wed Feb 01 17:05:29 2012 +0100
files:       network-api/index.html
description:
Language fixes and applying Robin Berjon comments.


diff -r 8fdb8dffe5be -r e79e160c329e network-api/index.html
--- a/network-api/index.html	Tue Jan 31 18:40:09 2012 +0100
+++ b/network-api/index.html	Wed Feb 01 17:05:29 2012 +0100
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 
   <body>
     <section id='abstract'>
-      The Network Information API provides an interface for Web Applications to
+      The Network Information API provides an interface for web applications to
       access the underlying connection information of the device.
     </section>
 
@@ -55,20 +55,20 @@
     <section class="informative">
       <h2>Introduction</h2>
       <p>
-        The Network Information API provides an interface enabling Web applications to access the underlying
+        The Network Information API provides an interface enabling web applications to access the underlying
         connection information of the device.
       </p>
       <p>
         The following example shows how an image viewer can select a low definition or a high definition image based on the
         current connection bandwidth:
-      <pre class="example sh_javascript">
+      <pre class="example highlight">
         &lt;!DOCTYPE&gt;
         &lt;html&gt;
           &lt;head&gt;
             &lt;title&gt;Poney viewer&lt;/title&gt;
           &lt;/head&gt;
           &lt;body&gt;
-            &lt;img id='poney' alt="An image showing a poney" title="My precious!"&gt;&lt;/img&gt;
+            &lt;img id='poney' alt="An image showing a poney" title="My precious!"&gt;
             &lt;script&gt;
               var i = document.getElementById('poney');
 
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
         The concepts <dfn><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/webappapis.html#queue-a-task">
         queue a task</a></dfn> and
         <dfn><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/webappapis.html#fire-a-simple-event">
-        fires a simple event</a></dfn> are defined in [[!HTML5]].
+        fire a simple event</a></dfn> are defined in [[!HTML5]].
       </p>
 
       <p>
@@ -114,6 +114,18 @@
         <dfn><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/webappapis.html#event-handler-event-type">
         event handler event types</a></dfn> are defined in [[!HTML5]].
       </p>
+
+      <p>
+        The concepts of <dfn><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/browsers.html#browsing-context">
+        browsing context</a></dfn> and
+        <dfn><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/browsers.html#active-document">
+        active document</a></dfn> are defined in [[!HTML5]].
+      </p>
+
+      <p>
+        The concept of document <dfn><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/origin-0.html#the-document-s-domain">
+        domain</a></dfn> is defined in [[!HTML5]].
+      </p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
@@ -151,9 +163,14 @@
                  interface Connection : EventTarget' class='idl'>
         <dt>readonly attribute double  bandwidth</dt>
         <dd>
-          The attribute SHOULD return an estimation of the current bandwdith in MB/s (Megabytes per seconds) the <a>user agent</a>
-          has with the Document's subdomain. It MUST return Infinity if the bandwidth is unknown and it MUST return 0 if the user
-          is currently offline.
+          The <a>user agent</a> MUST set the value of the <code>bandwidth</code> attribute to:
+          <ul>
+            <li>0 if the user is currently offline;</li>
+            <li>Infinity if the bandwidth is unknown;</li>
+            <li>an estimation of the current bandwidth in MB/s (Megabytes per seconds) available for communication with the
+                <a>browsing context</a> <a>active document</a>'s <a>domain</a>.
+            </li>
+          </ul>
         </dd>
         <dt>readonly attribute boolean metered</dt>
         <dd>
@@ -168,11 +185,12 @@
             Examples of metered connections are mobile connections with a small bandwidth quota or connections with a pay-per use plan.
           </div>
           <p>
-            The attribute SHOULD return true if the connection with the Document's subdomain is <a title='metered'>metered</a> and false otherwise.
-            If the implementation is not able to know the status of the connection or if the user is offline, it MUST return false.
+            The <a>user agent</a> MUST set the value of the <code>metered</code> attribute to true if the connection with the
+            <a>browsing context</a> <a>active document</a>'s <a>domain</a> is <a title='metered'>metered</a> and false otherwise.
+            If the implementation is not able to know the status of the connection or if the user is offline, the value MUST be set to false.
           </p>
           <div class="note">
-            If not able to know if a connection is metered, a <a>user agent</a> could ask the user about the status of his current connection.
+            If unnable to know if a connection is metered, a <a>user agent</a> could ask the user about the status of his current connection.
             For example, a preference could let the user define if the mobile connection used on the device is metered.
           </div>
         </dd>
@@ -182,7 +200,7 @@
 
       <p>
         When the <code>Connection</code> changes, the <a>user agent</a> MUST <a>queue a task</a> which updates
-        the <code>Connection</code> properties and <a>fires a simple event</a> named <code>change</code> at the
+        the <code>Connection</code> properties and <a>fire a simple event</a> named <code>change</code> at the
         <code>Connection</code> object.
       </p>
 
@@ -224,7 +242,7 @@
         This trivial example writes the connection bandwidth to the console and shows it again each time it is changing:
       </p>
       <div class="example">
-        <pre class="example sh_javascript">
+        <pre class="example highlight">
           function show() {
             console.log(navigator.connection.bandwidth);
           }
@@ -239,7 +257,7 @@
         This example shows how an application can prevent automatic polling using the metered attribute:
       </p>
       <div class="example">
-        <pre class="example sh_javascript">
+        <pre class="example highlight">
           &lt;!DOCTYPE html&gt;
           &lt;html&gt;
             &lt;head&gt;
@@ -266,7 +284,7 @@
                 }, false);
 
                 // At load time.
-                if (navigator.connection.metered) {
+                if (!navigator.connection.metered) {
                   gIntervalId = setInterval(poll, 1000);
                 }
               &lt;/script&gt;
@@ -282,6 +300,7 @@
     <section class='appendix'>
       <h2>Acknowledgements</h2>
       <p>
+        Special thanks to Robin Berjon for his help.
       </p>
     </section>
   </body>

Received on Wednesday, 1 February 2012 16:05:53 UTC