2009/dap/privacy-practices Overview.html,1.13,1.14

Update of /sources/public/2009/dap/privacy-practices
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv31979

Modified Files:
	Overview.html 
Log Message:
update title, shortname, abstract and intro text for web applications
(vs service providers), and add reference to Mobile Web Application
Best Practices.


Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/2009/dap/privacy-practices/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -d -r1.13 -r1.14
--- Overview.html	15 Jul 2011 20:27:01 -0000	1.13
+++ Overview.html	19 Jul 2011 12:33:14 -0000	1.14
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 <!DOCTYPE html>
 <html>
   <head>
-    <title>Privacy Best Practices for Service Providers</title>
+    <title>Web Application Privacy Best Practices</title>
     <meta http-equiv='Content-Type' content='text/html;charset=utf-8' />
     <script src='../ReSpec.js/js/respec.js' class='remove'></script>
     <script class='remove'>
       var respecConfig = {
       specStatus: "ED",
-      shortName:            "dap-privacy-practices",
+      shortName:            "app-privacy-bp",
       editors: [
       { name: "Frederick Hirsch", company: "Nokia", companyURL:
       "http://www.nokia.com/" },
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@
   </head>
   <body>
     <section id='abstract'>
-      This document describes privacy best practices for service
-      providers, including those that might use device
+      This document describes privacy best practices for web
+      applications, including those that might use device 
       APIs.
     </section> <!-- abstract -->
 
@@ -39,9 +39,10 @@
     <section id='introduction'>
       <h2>Introduction</h2>
       <p>
-        This document outlines good privacy practices for service
-        providers, including those that might use
-        device APIs. It does not repeat the privacy principles and
+        This document outlines good privacy practices for web
+        applications, including those that might use 
+        device APIs. This continues the work on privacy best practices
+        in section 3.3.1 on "User Awareness and Control"  Mobile Web Application Best Practices [[MWABP]]. It does not repeat the privacy principles and
         requirements documented in the Device API Privacy Requirements Note
         [[DAP-PRIVACY-REQS]] which should also be consulted.
       </p>
@@ -50,7 +51,8 @@
       <h3>Privacy By Design</h3>
       <p>
         The principles of "Privacy by Design" should be reflected in the
-        service design and implementation, including the use of device APIs.
+        web application design and implementation, including the use
+        of device APIs. 
         These are enumerated below and in more detail in the reference
       [[PRIVACY-BY-DESIGN]].</p> 
       <div class="practice">

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